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by CardDragonBall

person wendyghost
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i read all three fics and they were great! maybe not that gohan got with Radditz! but the rest was good!
person Dikun
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve read the entire series so far, and was sad to see that this was the last chapter. I think your story is awsome. You really try to keep them in character... well Vegeta and Goku anyways. Always hated gohan, so it wasn\'t too bad. Keep up the good work! Are you going to make it a trillogy? Gohan and Radditz\'s space adventure and probably something with PIccolo, because he\'s been acting all strange and being ignored. Anyways, I\'m looking forward to the next chapter. Hope to see it soon!!
person Lestat
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOO!! You can\'t finish it like this!! T.T Sniff... What about Gokou and Vegeta?? You forgot about them??? Yo can\'t do this!! You can\'t do me this!! SNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNIFF!!!

person Kaki
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You rock. *mwah*(big sloppy kiss) I am soooo loving the Radditz/Gohan Smut of Dysfunction. It just made my day.
person Saiyajin-Neko
schedule November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Raditsu is kinda cute like this, not being a pig. Still can't believe he wanted Goten though...poor Goten and Trunks, lol. With the way he's going it wouldn't suprise me if he made a pass at Goku. XD That reminds me, we need more T/G, G/V action...soon. ~Nods~ Can't wait till the next chap, Ja ne!
person Webtester01
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I can do is ROFLMAO.
person Webtester01
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 18


Raditz is hilarious. I thought the porn number was classic. (Math would be a lot of fun ;-) ) And Videl's reaction was priceless, but expected. I wonder what Vegeta and Kakarott are going to do with the drunk one. *smirk* I do hope that it will be funny. (I love your work.) Roshi might be upset that someone got into his stash.


~Webtester01~

person Saiyajin-Neko
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Those were fast updates. Hmm, i really love that Gohan took controll, very nice. ^_^ (Sorrycan'can't donate...not aloud) Can't wait untill the next chap, Ja ne!
person Webtester01
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 17


Interesting twist. Athough I was expecting Gohan to do something like that. *smirk*


Go Vegeta! Teach Goku those tail tricks. LOL


Write the next chapter soon please.


~Webtester01~

person Webtester01
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!

Poor Gohan, thinking too much. Raditz will help remedy that.

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