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person (STILL CAN'T LOG IN!!) Saiyajin-Neko
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh poor Gohan..lmao. I love how he thought he was inlove with Vegeta while drunk. XD I can't wait till the next chap, Ja ne!
person macha
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH, I do, I really do like it! *Rubs hands together in a most evil way* I like watching Gohan second guess himself in this situation. Muwahahahahahahahahah.

And Goku, Stay out of it. Your son is a grown man, and could kick Radditz's as back to HFLI if he felt like it.
person Saiyajin-Neko (can't log in)
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Haven't been able to review for a while....Hmmm anyway still wondering what your going to do with Raditsu...are you going to put him with Gohan? Like i asked last time? ^_______________^ It would be funny and so cool. I do hope so. Now he seems alot better behaved, i'm glad about that.
person macha
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting: Vegeta wondering "Why" now. Well, it should turn out interesting then. Still holding out in favor of Goku I.T.ing Vegeta and himself to earth and leaving Radditz on his own foe lae landing. *Shrugs* I guess it will depend on Radditz's behavior as to whether or not Goku or Vegeta thinks that's necessaid fid fid find Vegeta's reactions to Radditz rather interesting, revealing a little bit more about their relationship.

hehe, YEah, Leave the mattress in Yamcha's trash. I like it. And I am so glad Trunks didn't feel the need to inform his mother of what the fluid was. I think I would have had to have serious doubts about his sanity.

No Lemons? *scratches head* I guess the stories have been interesting enough without them if I haven't noticed!
person jaygoose
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, even though Raditz is being a total ass clown. I still can't dislike him. Even in my story where he is an even bigger ass I still like him. It's like one of those abusive relationships were you just can't leave them because u think they only hurt you because they love you. I know I'm sad. But I just love him. Wait a mintue...*checks shoulder for mated mark and finds nothing*...wonderful! I was saving that spot for Cell anyways. Heh heh.

I'm glad to see the boys back and banging again. Poor Yamcha, the Sanitation Technicians are gonna think he's a sick perveted bastard. Eh...who really cares what they think anyway.
person Webtester01
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a funny chapter.

Yamcha will be upset though. LOL
person macha
schedule September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really loved Goku's response to Radditz's "I had him first." hehe "I have him now." Made me smile. (I would have laughed, but people are sleeping at the moment.) And then, to go and prove just what "I have him now," means. MMMMMMMMmmmmmmmmmm lemons, in a shower, on a space ship. Yes, I suppose any noises Vegeta makes as a result are going to be heard quite well.

Now, to Trunks and Goten. hehe, "Talk?" "Later" Yeah, don't interupt a good thing. Jeez! hehe
person QueenSaiyan
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hooray, I believe I'm finally up to date! For weeks now I've been reading through MoP, Saiyan Enlightenment and now I've arrived at the most recently posted chapter of Unbeaten Paths! There have been so many moments I've wanted to review or comment on the fics, but I've had to restrain myself because they *weren't recent*! Ahem. Now that I can finally review, I've forgotten what I wanted to say. XD I'll content myself with giving you my complete and unconditional thanks for writing such ag ang and excellent series of fics. ^_^ That, and tell you that you must (MUST!) have Raditz.. And Vegeta... And Goku.... Together in a big ball of Saiyan goodness. Or else I shall beat you to death with plushies.

(But wait, that would mean no more fic... >_>;; *runs away to await the next chapters, Saiyan love triangle or not*)
person Webtester01
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens!

Raditz, Kakarott, and Vegeta are sure in for a ride home. *Grin*

Looking forward to next chapter.
person macha
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't ask me why, but I found the behavior of Trunks and Goten kind of funny. (by that I mean ha ha funny) Crazy sayians! Go from I love you to beating the crap out of eachother to the point of breaking appendages? I guess the boys will just have to wait until Vegeta gets home to find out what's normal and what's not.

Yeah, having Goku and Radditz on the same ship, with one bedroom, wasn't the best thought out plan. I hope they make it to earth alive. Are you taking bets on how long before Goku I.T.'s himself and Vegeta to earth? Lea Rad Radditz on the autopiloted ship to make it to earth in one piece? I think it may have a distance factor involved, but I don't know.

I am glad you updated. Sorry I haven't been to your site lately, but I really do like leaving reviews here for you.

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