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LMAO! Goten purrrs and Trunks Is that normal-like stuff? Goku being overly lust-driven to prove Raditz was never in his league of lover-dom? Too funny! I eagerly await your next chapter! =)

Love this fic! Please keep it coming!!!! SOON PLEASE?!!!

Update dammit! I'm an impatient fan who needs the writer to write more so I can devour their latest works! S, I', I'm feeling kinda Saiyany today, I read too fast. Anyway, I love your work and would like to see more as soon as you can get it up there. Was that nicer? (big puppy eyes with the need for love) I'll be good, I promise!

LOL! LMAO! That was too f--king funny!!! OMG, Goku just punches Raditz, powers up, and by God, that is THAT! Too funny! I love it! This chappie and the last chappie were FANTASTIC! I cannot wait for more! =)

Poor Goku, I am glad all it took was another nap for him to feel so much better. And the Dende clone thing was FUNNY. Yeah, The nameks proabably w jus just let Goku make a wish without a huge hassel. I am surprised that Radditz wasn't more shocked. Maybe laughter was his way of dealing with it. *shrugs*

Well, now they get to go home to see the devistation that their sons have been creating (or is it just Goten?)

It's alright. I am glad you felt that I could be a sounding board for your troubles. I really have no idea what kind of problems trying to publish creates, so all I do do is listen. No helpful hints from me.

I plan on going to check out that site you posted. Is the fantasy story going to be on paper? And yes, I can imagine that tryto eto explain such a story would be horrific.

I think I would vacate the area also if Goten was busy with a crowbar. Sounds like a smart thing to do. It was, however, very rude of him to make Bra loose her cheerio. After all, Bulma had been being kind to him, and he left her on that note. *shrugs* Even the best of us are rude at times. Being confused can do that to a normally 'good' person. Well, hmmm, I didn't think that the crowbar activity would have that kind of effect. Don't ask me why I thought this. Goten is half sayian after all. I should have expected it.

That was one awfully mean way for Vegeta to help Goku get his tail back. I was all set for the spanking, but alas, Goku finally had other things to occupy his mind. I think that he should have been more grateful that the 71 words over DID include his climax. Silly sayian.

On a different note, you're publishing? WAY COOL. Keep me up to date on how it goes, alright. (please and thank you)

Whats happening to Goten? I don't get it...i hope its nothing to bad. Please update soon..i know your busy but its killing me. Sorry Card-san, i don't mean to beg but, i can't help it. Ja ne!

I don't know. If I were Vegeta, I think I would be saying, "Nah, nah, na, nah, nah," so it's probably best that I am NOT Vegeta. hehe I would have to agree with his logic on licking wound. He made it, why shouldn't he get to lick it. hehe

OH, I HATE it when I get into a logic/emotional loop. It's like those times when I bitch(complain), and then my b/f tries to find a sloution to the problem I have been bitching about, I am not happy about him trying to find a solution(I do think it's rather sweet of him to try though). So, rather than be angry with him, I explained it to him once. I said, "I just want to bitch. I didn't really need help solving it." And now, all I have to say is, "I just want to bitch," and I think he has learned to go into g/f sounds like this "Blah, blah, BLAH, blAH," mode. Just let's me do my bitching. hehe. Not exactly what Goten is going througut iut it seems to have the same lack of answeres. Well, except for the temporary one of Chocolate. *Hmmmm*

I love you Card. You know what this story needs??? The Twins. The insane troublemaking twins that make up my world. *snickers as Goten facefaults and Trunks sweatdrops* i love doing that to them. keep going!!!!

W00t, tails, i can't wait! Please forgive me not reviewing, its hard on me at the moment, and i'm sorry to hear that you are so busy aswell. I can't wait till the next chap (Whenever that might be) i want to see more of Goku and Vegeta and their funny arguments and lovely lemon moments. XD Update as soon as you can Card-san, Ja ne!