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Oh the humor.
More!

I wasn\'t on the internet for a \'whole\' day yesterday... it felt weird, I felt deprived. 0_0

I liked the introduction to the chapter, it was such a blunt statement. ^_^
I especially liked: - \'It’s like if you tortured an asexual namek into shifting all uncomfortable back and forth like he was getting something special in his trousers but being asexual…\' - LMAO

I think Trunks and Goten have a good plan going... ^_~

Sorry for the short review, I asked for overtime at work and my manager put me down for full time... *sighs*

\"...Or when he tore Vegeta’s clothes why [while] they were fighting and his mind got so lost somewhere between ‘bed’ and ‘sex’ that he forgot that he was fighting and inevitably ended up with a face full of some kind of shrubbery as he was kicked across the face of the planet.\" LMAO!!!! Oh my Goddess, I just got that picture, in full clarity, in my mind. \"“We could move out to their house and just have sex for a week after we sanitize the mattress.” There must be something wrong with the royal bloodline. Something that made them think only with a certain part of their brain and the rest of the time they didn’t care too much about what happened.\" ROFL! Oh, that was the cincher! Plyric *rubs laughter tears from her eyes.* Great lift-off! =)

Yeah, yeah, yeah, I know I just reviewed, but that was Chapter 3. Chapter 2 deserves more than a review, it deserves an award! OMG! THAT Lemon gave me some of the BEST wet dreams I\'ve ever had! (Maybe it\'s because my imagination runs into the physical? =) ) \"Legs opened wider, hips tipped up at him and there was another beautiful whine. “Vegeta…” a breath, then like a dark little secret the blush and: “Fuck me.” Ah. Beautiful. He felt it was his duty, as Kakarot’s lover, to fully appreciate moments like this when the normally dominant man offered up himself.\" Beautiful! \"...whined while Vegeta watched him work himself into a frenzy trying to fuck himself.\" LOL! \"who was still blushing. “You an Evil man, Vegeta,” Kakarot said, kissed him shortly and then pushed himself up and grimaced at the mess they made. “And as a reward, you can fix the bed.” Then he disappeared toward the bathroom, and Vegeta sighed. Laid there for a moment and just grinned. \" LMAO, that was such a Vegeta-esque thing for Goku to say and act! I love it! Now, on to Chappie 4! =)

They left...they actually left! Why am I so sad. This is a good thing right. Convince me that this is a good thing. And where the hell is Raditz! *sobs* I want my Raditz!

~Sniffs the air~ Do i smell a lemon? ~Grins~The bit where Vegeta turns around and says \"Now, your thinking about me\" AHAHAHAHAHA, that was just the funnyest scene ever Card-san. I can\'t wait till the next chap, Ja ne!

I have to wonder; if everyone except Vegeta thinks this is a bad idea, why doesn\'t he listen. Okay, that was kind of stupid, but like I said, I had tndernder.

I hope the space ship they are traveling on can withstand the stress (pressure) associated with lemons. I also hope they find are able to find planets to resupply on. Looks like that may be necessary.

Did I miss something? Why are Trunks and Goten only talking about a weeks worth of time?

Awesome 2 chappies!
I love it!
But you probably knew that I would love it.
And a lemon in the 2nd chappie, you can\'t beat that!
So Goku has agreed to wish Radditz back, even after a very long talk with Piccolo. I can\'t wait to see what will happen.
Sorry for the delay in reviews...I have been so so so busy and I am leaving for Japan in 3 days.
but this fic is great. I am just so excited to see what will happen when Radditz will come. I keep wondering if Goku will be able to contain himself and his jealous rages.
Guess I have to wait and see what goes down.
^.*
-MB-

First of all to the responce of the review, *looks skeptical* Riiight.

OH, what a lovely lime and lemon. I especially liked the lemon with the no hands rule. I think Bulma put the bar there on purpose, (of course) And I believe that Vegeta should be looking around the room for hidden cameras. Well, that is IF he actually cares.

Well, I guess that would be one way to spend time during space travel, regenerate tails. Of course, I would hope there was only going to be one such session for both sayians. I can\'t imagine that they would be so bored out of their minds they would cut them off just to regrow them. *shakes head* NO, that sounds like a terrible plan.

Hey- just a though, but are the memoirs (spell?) Vegeta\'s writing going to play a part in this or be spin off? Or will Raditz read them?
Also, the final time we see Raditz (on the show, to my memory serving well, excluding GT) he\'s in a laundry room, so will he come back and be good at ironing? :)