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Lemon overload...Lemon overload! Are you seriously trying to kill me? *grins* You\'re the best!

*Stares wide eyedfic fic and begins reading although it 3.30 in the morning*

(Chap 1 review)
One thing I must say, Goku is so cute!!! *huggles hiI thI think I was as surprised as Vegeta when he said the Radditz should be resurrected.

I thought this was really cute: - \'So first he got to hang out with Vegeta in space for a while, and then they would get Radditz (if that was really what Vegeta wanted.)\' - ^-^

(Chap 2 review)
4 in the morning for training... if that were me right now that would mean me getting up in 30 mins. *laughs*
But I guess Goten gave Trunks incentive enough! ^.~

- \'The moron was talking to his erection.\' - cute... a little strange but cute none the less. ^_^

Yum lemon! *hentai grin*

- \'And as a reward you can fix the bed.\' - A price to pay for sex. ^_~

That was another great chapter!

You are a talented writer, morso than me.

Keep up the good work.

Vegeta: Goku, you were on top. O_O He said \'Goku\'. Oh and i was only messing, you don\'t HAVE to make the girls get together ya know. -_- I loved the lemon between Goku and Vegeta ~Nods~y niy nice, hehe. Can\'t wait till the next chap (Sorry i didn\'t review soon enough, my birthday an all) Ja ne!

So, Piccolo has spoken and Son has listened, as usual. Hmm, seems kind of fishy to me. I think Piccolo wants them off planet for some reason.......

..........*smirks* Nah! Just kidding!

It does seem that Goku listens an awful lot to him though. I guess Vegeta should be grateful, in a way. They are going to resurect(spelling, sorry) Radditz. (I found it funny that Goku didn\'t like the letter R any more and twitched at \'itz\' sounds, hehe)

The mud figas aas amusing. Well, at least to me it was. It seemed as though Vegeta didn\'t share in this amusment. *shrugs* Oh well, they are in the shower now!

WOO HOO!!wondwonder who you are going to pair Raditsu off with, maybe Gohan, HAHAHAHA. I mean think about it, is you get him to be with Gohan then he might be a bit more understanding. But we all know it\'s not going to happen, he has a lot of haters to be of any use in this story now. Are you ever going to make those blasted baby\'s grow up and get together? I want some Bura/Pan love. Can\'t wait till the next chap, Ja ne!

The last sentence of the first paragraph was hillarious.

...We didn\'t want to stay on earth, that we were going to go look for more Saiyans.\" Pause. \"Then Piccolo said \'sure, why not? While you\'re at it, why don\'t you resurrect them all?\' ... ... Vegeta are you listening to me?\" LOL That would be interesting. *smirk* \"Yes, Kakarot.\" \"Good. Because I have thought about it a lot, and I figure that we can resurrect Radditz.\" Vegeta must have the look of O.O *jaw dropped* on his face. LOL

Hmm...so I\'m going to have to wait around for my Raditz huh? Fine then...but just know that you have just saved his life in my fic. I was going to kill him off, but I\'m thinking that he can s aro around now. Heh...heh...

Hey, s wos working again. (AFF). Anyway, this looks to be a mighty good fic (with it\'s predecessors, how could it not?). I love the way Piccollo is portrayed as an agony aunt! (He should do thoose Women\'s/ Teens magazines- his own column \"Ask Auntie Piccollo\". With a picture of him in a bonnet?) And Vegeta\'s \"most amused non-amused look\" ever. Catchy.
BTW, good luck with your site. Much quicker than AFF, and nice and simple to use. ;)

LOL!!! Vegeta being prissy and Goku being a big horny baby! ROFL! Awesome first, er 81st, chappie!!! =))) This is going to be really interesting with Raditz. I\'ve added your webpage to my Favorites, so keep it up! (or rather, let the boys keep theirs... up!) ;)