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for Vindicated

by Veggiefan2

person Robyn
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am actually very happy we got to see a little point of view for Goku. :)

Now I can't wait for him to go and see Vegeta!


Thank you for the update. :)
person Susie Q
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to your next update. I'm enjoying the build-up.
person Robyn
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So much insight into Vegeta's thoughts, emotions and memmories in this chapter. *sigh* Is there ever going to be a time when it isn't about angst? *SOBS*


Okay. a-hem. Now, thank you for letting us know you may not be able to update this as often as we/you would like. That was very thoughtful of you.
person CrimsonTide
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter :) I know life can get busy, so I understand updates will be few and far inbetween, but I hope you plan on continuing and finishing this fic. It's so very good and I can't wait to see how it develops! Keep up the fantastic work :)
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great story!!! Update SOON!!!
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i know of a baka that ruined what couldve been a perfectly good yaoi
person Robyn
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the way you had Goku thinking things through. Very real, even to the point he was calling himself an idiot.

Yes, why wait around for someone/thing that may never happen? Get a move on boy; life is still going on out there.


Excellent chapter.
person Macha
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
At first I was concerned seeing Bulma's thoughts enter the story, but I think you have handled the addition very well.

I like how neither of them are perfect, they both have their selfish reasons for keeping things the way they are.


Well done!
person Robyn
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am very happy to hear you haven't given up on this! So much angst. *sighs* I want to see them patch things up, and how you're going to make that work!
person pun_xy
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More! And fast!
that's all I've got to say... ^^

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