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Oooooo, this is getting interesting. Good story, when will there be more?

ah wow, this was pretty depressing. vegeta's mental voice is smarter than him, hehe. he sould listen to it more. and kakarot is totally fed up with him, not that i blame him, great chapter can't wait for the next.

I really like this story. I like following Vegeta's conflicted feelings and the confrontations with Kakarott are great.

Please update again when you can.

Please! continue this one *puppy-eyes* this is so great n_n

Omg thats really sad. It brings teras to my eyes.

More would be appreciated!! I don\'t really like fics where this happens, but please!!!

Wow.. erm i think that was the shortest fic i have ever read... you need to make the chapters longer. LONGER! Just a little advice. I do love that song and i see potential in this fic, but you need to make it longer- that\'s the only advice i can give you and this:
Write for yourself. not for others. It shouldnt\' matter what others think, only you. Reviews arn\'t really that important anyways. But now you have 3. I reviewed for that single reason so you would continue writing. So, i do hope you do so. Just take my advice and everything will be fine. And i do hope to see some Vegeta/Goku action.. ^_~

What a start ! You\'ve got me all wrapped up.. I cant wait to see more, I can understand asking for reviews, I myselfwaitwaiting on getting 10 reviews on my fic \"Meant To Live\". Anyways ... wonderful wonderful wonderful !

~Angel

Oh, I hope you continue. When I first heard that song I thought to myself, \"Who\'s going to write the fanfiction to it?\" So, I am eager to see where you take this. I only hope that future chapters with be much, much longer.