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June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was...interesting. One thing I\'m wondering is where Goku is.
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May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a good story but it could use some work. The sentences are weird, it lacks coordination. Characters could use a bit more dept. Keep it up though. :)
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February 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ummm...yea it kinda scared me for a minute but I like it...but what would Goku say about it?! O_o
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January 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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January 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thumps up to this great story! There were some of the same type of stories lost to FF.net dumb shit. Anyway, I like to see more!
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November 4, 2002 at 12:00 AM
That was good. I agree with the person who reviewed your other story, though. Having words said like \"Gohan: blah blah\" and \"Goten: Blah blah blah\" is kind of annoying. Otherwise it\'s great. Keep it up.
Work, love, and dance,
Goruda Shiro
Work, love, and dance,
Goruda Shiro
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October 25, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Aweseome story ! It\'s rare to see writers willing to do insect stories , and write them so well. I thought this was a terfic story , and was pleased to see she had anal preformed to her :) I would difenetly like to read more of your work !