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for Broken Lullabyes

by suger45

person Pain, Death, Torture
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon... I'm enjoyings. As. Are all 3 of them going to go at it or... yeah.. never mind. Guess I'll have to wait for the update then? Is Kai at least going to get hurt? YES! PAIN! lol. >.~ anyway update soon, looking foreword to it.

PDT
person G.k
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
one of the best fics out there. I love it, there are not many fics where kai is the uke ^_^. VERY good
person nikki
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice...........................................................................................
person h�l�ne
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sooooooooo good!!! i can\'t belive it!!oh my gosh!!yo i really really love your storie!! with kai the uke its impossible to be bad!! and when you always mention that kai is small,well its so fun!! i can\'t wait to know what rei did to kai !! i mean kai seems pretty upset and tala his mad about ..so you can\'t blame me for wanting to know!! and is kai going to end up with tala or rei? for that i really don\'t mind coz i like both couple!! anyways could you just send me an email when you update to make sure i go read it??thanks!
bye de bye
hélène
person Trinity of the phoenix
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, I think that now, the fun really begins.
person Raven
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes!!!!! YAY!!!!! I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE YOU!!!!!!
person rejiita
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow!! good chap!!
hope you update soon :D:D:D
person lonephoenix905
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*jaw dropped* WHY I OTTA- *gets restrained by two of her friends* *sighs knowing she can\'t hurt them*

poor Rei.... T_T stupid Tala...no offence or anything but I like Rei more, sorry

Please continue!! I wanna know the outcome of this story! ^-^
person nikki
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
is this a tala/kai fic or a ray/kai fic?Honestly my fav couple is ray an kai an honestly i despise tala when my bff has a crush on him.*shivers in disgust*Me an my bff are really oposite eachother.I\'m serius an i like to be alone an to do my own thing and shes always hyper active and craving attention.I\'m a girl to.In a way i\'m kai an she tyson or max.anyway e-mail me back if you can.
person nikki
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what i didn\'t mention in my last review is that........I can\'t wait for the next chapter!Your grammer and spelling is good to.An ray an kai better become lovers or i\'m gonna throw a fit.Not like anyone cares anyway.

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