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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i was reading your story and chapter 9 isn't there? did you take it off or something cos i was really enjoying this please post it back up.
from kitty
from kitty
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far but your missing chapter 8 where Vegeta is supposed to apologize and agree to move in with Goku!!! Please post it. Thank!
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
as much as i love this story i think your chapter 8 or 9 is missing cos i haven\'t been able to read it the many times i\'ve read this fic, oh and please don\'t state the obvious \"and only now your asking\" cos i\'ve been pretty tied up. any way love the story
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was so cute! And funny! Hmm...who would think drunken Vegeta would be so cute...
I liked that very much!
I liked that very much!
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July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Normally I wouldn\'t review until I had read all the chapter you have put up, but I couldn\'t resist. I love it when author\'s are so discriptive and this first chapter, dispite what you said about it being angsty, was wonderfully discriptive. Especially Goku\'s surroundings.
One to the next chapter.
One to the next chapter.
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July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are setting it up so nicely, I don\'t think either sayian has a clue as to what is actally going on. Smooth, very smooth.
*Pictures author laying down two seperate trails of goodies saying \"Here Vegeta, Here Goku, got something good for ya.\"*
(Don\'t mind the random craziness, if you continue to post here, you\'ll get use to it!)
So, only because you have commented on it first.... sometimes a fic. just goes faster and smoother,(seems to be the word for this review), not to mention much less angst, if Vegeta IS OOC. *shrugs* I don\'t mind. I think the only OOC Vegeta I would not like is if he was waaaaaaaaaaaaaay prissy. (Nope, can\'t imagine liking a prissy Vegeta) I do like this one though.... and of course to Goku.
So, just incase you have taken anything I said the wrong way, I love you fic, and hope you update soon!
*Pictures author laying down two seperate trails of goodies saying \"Here Vegeta, Here Goku, got something good for ya.\"*
(Don\'t mind the random craziness, if you continue to post here, you\'ll get use to it!)
So, only because you have commented on it first.... sometimes a fic. just goes faster and smoother,(seems to be the word for this review), not to mention much less angst, if Vegeta IS OOC. *shrugs* I don\'t mind. I think the only OOC Vegeta I would not like is if he was waaaaaaaaaaaaaay prissy. (Nope, can\'t imagine liking a prissy Vegeta) I do like this one though.... and of course to Goku.
So, just incase you have taken anything I said the wrong way, I love you fic, and hope you update soon!
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I am so glad you decided to post it here! Poor Goku - has to tame his arousal with cold water...ineresting how many times a day does he do that... ;) He really needs Vegeta, and badly...
Yay! I\'m first reviewer here ;) See ya!
Yay! I\'m first reviewer here ;) See ya!