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Although you need to work on the grammar errors and typos in your writing, you have managed to capture some of the drama that this relationship would have. Your story was one of the few I have read that doesn't take away 18's memories as an excuse to make her fall in love. Although I highly doubt Trunks would have any pity for a child murderer. By the way, the Androids' "ki" can't be sensed, because it isn't actual ki. This is made clear in the manga and the anime. Just say he can find her due to Electromagnetic waves her brain and/or energy give off. Or have Bulma build a device that can track androids.

Awesome fanfic update soon

This is an interesting fanfic can\'t wait to read the next chapters update soon

I enjoyed reading this story. I look forward to reading the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon