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DBZ is on now on CN as i write this. ya know, they fight DEMONS a whole lot. i begin to think that maybe some of the geek kweerz who write this pap are full of demons..like maybe there are long evil SNAKES in your lower intestine that make you seriously deranged. i mean...

first the big flaw is thatGoku leaves the strongest woman in the world behind when he could take herwith him and they could fight together. WHERE DOES TEH ANAL SEX COME IN? You...have issues that cognitive therapy could address...the pills wil never treat them. I mean -- what a LOAD, what a LIVING LOAD.

why don\'t you write your own stories>? is it just becayse you are geek and queer? cause..LOVE SHOOK MY HEART and GIOVANNI\'S ROOM are fine examples of utterly gay fiction. instead..you are making kid\'s cartoons as gay and lame as possible...you are liketeh compulsive masturbators of Yuko mishima\'s tragedies./this makes me wish that fan fic would be made illegal and persecuted like illegal mp3s. and with masturbatoray and self - flaggelating FECES like this clogging up the site...maybe it won\'t be long before the FBI come here to find out how many MNORS are hanging oyut here writing about sex acts. i am sure it is illegal or at least very very IMMATURE.
i mean this is adult fan fiction -- not childish nerd girl smut fanffiction. find a lover or something.
Oh aI didn\'t read it.

yay i was waiting for this update!!!!

YES! I saw that you were on aff and I was like OMG HAS SHE UPDATED! *le squee!*

This was so awesome!

(Hope this chapter does it for you. A little creative loving.)

It did ^.^ WOW......

Okay.... Ima say this very calmly... I saw a \"Complete\" at the end that should NOT be there! Please tell meh that this fic has not been concluded!! there MUST be more!!! what about the kais!!! What about the whole freaky thing with Krillin?! What about Vegeta\'s and Chichi\'s baby? Loose ends!! Argh!!!! There must be more!! More, you Evil Cliffhanger Queen, or you shall recieve no more homage from me! >.< Well, mehbe I\'m over-exaggerating, but please don\'t make me beg. ^_^ I must give a big congrats to the super saiyajin sex scene. Whoo! I\'m still trying to catch my breath; all the spiraling and falling and twisting made me feel all dizzy and whatnot. Excellent. Truly magnificent. The tattoos, they seem to be the new source of their kis to me... since the areas are more sensitive to sensations such as for touch and ki, does that mean that they are also more susceptible to pain? It\'s like another tail spot, but as the product of mating and not something that they\'re born with. Is it going to be a weakness somewhere down the road? Could someone easily subdue them using the markings as Goku did to Radditz in the saiyan saga? This cannot be the end! I will not accept that! *stubbornly crosses arms and refuses to abandon her stalking post isnise of author\'s computer* you\'ll never be able to get rid of me... I love ya too much to just go away! I\'m not begging yet, but please make more!

Oh man that was wonderful!!!!! A just the right tonic for me two, I\'ve been really sick this last week with the flu, this makes me feel 100 times better, thankyou.

Chapter 38

Excellent writing. Very intense. I was on the edge of my seat the entire time. They\'ve waited for so long...now they are indeed a force to be reckoned with. The moment Vegeta realized he and Kakorr were destined for each other...poignant.

This is very beautifully written.

Very strong.

Very powerful.

filled--with--happiness!! WHEEEE!!!! YES! THEY DID IT!!! ^_____^ FINALLY!!!!! ::does a happy little dance:: those tats are awesome!!! I KNEW the book was about them, I just knew it! Whew... you had me very worried... when Goku told Piccolo what Vegeta had to do in order fer them to become mates, I thought he told him about the actual mating process, in effect making it not useable because Piccolo told Vegeta. But then, I found out I was wrong! When Vegeta wanted to go back to the past and Goku said they couldn\'t, almost had a heart attack! >.< and now poof! They\'re mates!! MATES!!! *crazed, maniacle laugh* I couldn\'t be prouder or more relieved! *insert worship of author here* ^_______^ happiness!

hmm... im guess ur gunna have a lemon in the next chapter... cause two days... wow
ps: im sooo glad that they finally got mated! im overflowing with excitment... grrrh. i blame u for my sickningly [is that a real word] sappy smile onmy face... =)

I finally got to read this! Yey! Mates! Mythology and ritual, ritual and mythology. And the sort of hard-earned joy that I\'ve come to expect from your relationship stuff.
I really don\'t want this to end. If my computer doesn\'t go out during all these damn storms, I may just want to draw something for this chapter....