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I finally got to read this! Yey! Mates! Mythology and ritual, ritual and mythology. And the sort of hard-earned joy that I\'ve come to expect from your relationship stuff.
I really don\'t want this to end. If my computer doesn\'t go out during all these damn storms, I may just want to draw something for this chapter....

i\'m still holding my breath wow what a chapter. I can\'t believe it finally happened for them. I know i\'m asking for to much but how would the *Love making * be for them now? I just want them to have a little more happiness before things start to happen to them.. *CLAPS* AND TAKE A BOW..... Please don\'t take to long to update....

yeah you are forgiven but only cuz they\'re finally mated.

*sobs* Soooo sweet! *hugs vegeta and goku plushies until their button eyes fall out*

Oh god i loved this chapter it was awesome i loved the mating ritual and the tatoo\'s were a nice twist
This is the greatest chapter iv ever read :)
you coulda ended it again but u didn\'t and im eternally grateful 4 it :D

Ah, the cerimony you wrote ws BRILLIANT, and I don\'t mean that in the flippant way used in Ireland and England. The process was well thought out and written down. I could gush on for hours about how well you did.

The best touch was Rouba telling them they had to break the old bond. *nods* Very wise on her part, which, since you are the author, made it very wise on your part.

Ah, the agony, even though it was only going to be short lived. I could just imagine panick quickly taking over if they hadn\'t fortified themselves with meditation earlier. That took a lot of guts on their parts, and showed just how dedicated they were to making this happen.

Hmmm, since this was mostly from Vegeta\'s POV, I wasn\'t too shocked when the Mark on Goku was a tree. However, I couldn\'t have even guessed that Vegeta\'s Mark would have been a dragon. Interesting, You\'ll have to explain why you chose that symbol for this. (hopefully I didn\'t just gloss over those details while reading.)

hehehehehe

Come get some NOW Kia\'s!!! *smirks*

I am so happy Krillian didn\'t show up and botch this up. I think I would have thought of you as evil for taking it to this level and then toying with your readers just a little more. (WOW 83 chapters! Thank goodness I and keeping up with this on an update to update basis, I can\'t imagine trying to read all of those chapters at once. @.@)

Well done!!!

*eyes fall out of head*
Methinks I smell a fresh lemony scent upon the air! YES!!! a lemon!!!! In honor of this fantabulous, incredible lemon, I will make... lemon meringue pie!!! mmmm... pie...

Awwww... they are soooo cute together!! *mentally picturing vegetas face at the term \"cute couple\"*

*dances around with spatula and lemon zest* MORE LEMONS MORE LEMONS!

Ooooohhhhhh yeah!!!!! Sweet dreams for me tonight! Thank you!!!! Holding on though as usual, always.

YAY! *claps hands* I\'m glad Vegeta was able to reach his epiphany. I hope they are able to mate soon! (that was the last obsticle, yes? o_O) Love the story. I got behind so I just finished reading like 10 chapters of it. (loved rouba by the way) Yay!

Yes, you are on a roll with this story right now. :D

This was a lovely chapter. The angst in the first part of it when Vegeta was still so afraid was almost disturbing. I am glad he wanted the victory back though :) It made this lemon all the better!!!

Ah, Goku is such a patient one. Good thing for Vegeta huh?

Can\'t go back? That wasn\'t the response I was expecting. I was expecting either No or Yes, but \'can\'t\' go back. Why not????

lol, I\'ll wait for the update so you can tell all of us.