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by Pixelgoddess

person mystic_banana
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*eyes fall out of head* wow. this has got to be the longest fanfiction yaoi story i have EVER read. My attention span is quite lacking.... at any rate, really really good. somebody ought to kill krillin and goku needs to be seme again. *hugs Vegeta* aw, your torturing him!
person Anon
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, both of them today i just couldnt stop, I actualy called in to work so i could stay home and keep reading lol. Please up date soon and thnx for sharing your story
person a
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad Vegeta finally got to grieve. Rouba tried. At least Vegeta knows he was loved by someone other than Kakarott.

Irony: The prophecy would never have come to pass had the Kais left well enough alone.

However: They delivered Prince Vegeta into the hands of the lizard. And as a result of their meddling, they now have two very pissed off full blooded Saiyans on their hands.[It\'s going to be VERY interesting to see Son\'s reactions when he confronts them about delivering his people into the hands of that evil freak.]

Apparently the kaious forgot that Saiyans are the living embodiment of the saying:
\"That which we survive, makes us stronger! I look foward to the coming battle.

[I grieve with Vegeta]

BTW....Piccolo is still a virgin!
person fyrbyrd
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Big sigh of relief) Thanks for the respite, I know it won\'t be long till you\'ll have us back at that cliff. There will be happiness for Vegeta one day?
person maccam
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You made me feel vegeta\'s pain. your going to make me cry and cry with this story. I want PV and Goku to find just a little peace >.> but i know you said it wont happen anytime soon . so i\'ll sit and wait this a box of tissues until another chapter is done..Maria
person Macha
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the tissues, but I don\'t need them, and I\'ll explain why. (hopefully Vegeta and Goku will get around to understanding this also.) Rouba had PRIDE. Yes, she loved her Prince and yes she knew she was going to die, but she did what she did anyway because she felt strongly enough to do so. She was a very brave woman, and I totally admire her for that.

I can understand Vegeta\'s tears, but he is crying for HIS loss right now, and a great loss it is. Rouba didn\'t see her efforts as a waste of time and did what she felt in her heart was right. Even going so far as dieing to try to turn the Sayians\' fates.

It was an totally selfless act of love on her part. Vegeta needs to understand that there really wasn\'t anything that he could have done to save her. I am not certain she would have let him try. So, I see his guilt as misplaced, and I hope that he comes to the realization that it was Rouba\'s choice, and she wouldn\'t take it back, even to save her world let alone her life. She knew the cub was going to survive, and that the sayian\'s under Freiza\'s rule were going to be terrors. (sometimes foresight is a bitch, ain\'t it?)

Okay, different subject, I almost fainted when Chichi brought up the restraint thing. I am not against that, *shrugs* different strokes for different folks, but the fact that Goku had been restrained by Frieza and Vegeta had been under the lizards control and raped him? O.O Um...... not a good subject to bring up. (Eep) Of course, I was glad the guys didn\'t take more offense to it other than being uncomfortable/embarassed. (That could have gotten ugly fast.)
person Kugatsu
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*latches onto leg* More chapters! *gnaws on ankle*
person Maria
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I took the time today to read both chapters of this wonderful story..pix girl your to much with these CLIFFHANGERS you know this right.. WOW so much in these two chapter . I can only wait and hope that these two will find peace soon but i know that won\'t happen for a while. thak you for to great chapters *HUGS*....update soon!!!!!
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another excelent chapter. Vegeta will be okay right? He can\'t die!!! Nonononononononononono!!! Okay...now that I\'ve got THAT out of my system...I\'ve never liked the Kias anyways, and you give me a good reason not to. They are pretty damn minipulative aren\'t they? -sigh- Well I can hardly wait for the next update. Mwah!
person Kugatsu
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries as the chapter ends too soon* throws bowls and food out of cage, curls up in corner and cries*

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