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Arrrrrr! I need a longer rope! My boys!!!! Beggin on knees update real soon, please, please, please. Still I can\'t wait for the Nail story, jumps up and down. The last ep of DBZ screen tomorrow then its off for I don\'t know how long. stories are all I\'ll have, well besides the DVD\'s I\'ve bought.(uncut). ;)

AAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh. This one leaves no clues as to what is to happen next. NONE. Dang it!!!

*scratches head* Well, maybe a small one, if the prophecy is going to be fulfilled, and Vegeta is their threat..... Mwuahahahahahahah.

*growls* I hate the Kia\'s and want them destroyed NOW. *mumbbles* Of course, then there wouldn\'t be much of a story then would there.

AAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh, the angst and tention are killing me!


P.S. Very good chapter.

Oh no! My poor boys...eek! I don\'t know if I\'ve mentioned this...but you are EXTREMELY creative. I love all of your fics. But I especially love Maintaining/Quest. I hope that Goku will get on with Vegeta\'s \'curing\'. And I\'m still so worried about our wittle Prince! He\'s been through so much...well...he is a great character to do all those things to. Anyways, can\'t wait for the next update! Love it! *mwah*

I think I will add to my bio that I\'m getting very good at cliffhanging, coz you\'ve got me doing it again! And I can\'t wait to read that other story, I still don\'t know why I like Nail a lot. His voice( Sean Schemmel) was here in Aust. this week, but I couldn\'t get to see him, damn it!
Can\'t wait for more of this either as you must have gathered. Thanx

Intrigue and action around every corner. Great job!

The descriptions are so colorful.

Keep it up.

**stares blankly at the screen for a few moments, blinking stupidly. then...**
OYS!! WHAT THE FUCK JUST HAPPENED?! WHICH PRINCE?! VEGETA OR, ER, LITTLE VEGETA?! WHY IS THIS SAIYAJIN BITCH ATTACKING THEM?! WHAT IS GOING ON WITH THE KI MANIPULATIONS AND THE BLOCKADES?! GET THEM FUCKING KAIS OUTTA THERE!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAARGHHHHH!!!! ROUBA!!! WHY IS SHE NOT HELPING THEM!!! WHAT IS SAKAA DOING, JUTS SITTIN\' ON HIS ARSE?! NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!! ::takes off french maid\'s outfit and throws it at author because she has run out of shoes::

*goes insane in cage* NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!*knocks over water dish throws food*

*screeches angrily*

VEGETAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA*screams at sky* I WILL AVENGE YOUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!

Okay, so, I haven\'t see one of these from you in a while but... AAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh EVIL CLIFF HANGER!!!

Mwuahahahhahah, of course, your response to me has settled that Vegeta will live, but I just have to wonder... How?

It\'s those stupid Kia\'s that set the female sayian on Vegeta, isn\'t it?! *growls*

Ah, and so the story of the pearl is answered... sort of.

Still, I hope Vegeta makes it through okay. It was good of the wise ones to let Goku know that there really was no way to aviod bloodshed. Unfortunately, it seems as though the Kai\'s follow the same mistake so many other\'s do. Trying to prove a prophecy false, they only make it come true. *sighs*

*shaking, breating at cage like angry monkey* MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *coughs* okay. please do you best.

gimme more!!! GIMME MORE!!!!!!!!! (calapses on computer screaming hysterically)

I like this fic. It has taken me 3 days to read Maintaining and Quest (well half of it). AND I WANT MORE!!!

Anyway...Sorry...Geta like personality taking over.

This is a well written story with lots of intrigue and Lemon. It has the appropriate amount of angst and Lime. I also like the origanality of alot of the scenes and words. Although I still cannot picture Geta doing to \'Goku embarrased\' thing.

PS: It has to have a happy ending or i will cry for weeks. It has been known to happen. Please have a happy ending, poor little Geta needs his mate... please...? (begins crying quietly in corner)