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This has got to be the BEST Goku / Vegeta fan fict out there!!

Chapter 28

*smirks at Nail* Nail is quite the character in Piccolo\'s head. LOL

I like you you described the Rouba&endash;very eloquent. I look forward to finding out the reason for the Rouba saying what she said to Vegeta at the end of this chapter.

Keep up the wonderful writting.

~Webtester01~

Eh. Only you can get under my skin so easily. Heh. (blink blink) french maid uniform? Eh... *tosses it on* I don\'t think it fits meh...heh. The skirt is very short.
change the future for the prince of that time? Mew. So the rouba know what\'s goin\' down... smart woman. Heh. What exactly went wrong with the spell and where did their clothes go?! Are the kais real, like did they gi back in time too, and if they beat the kais then could they maybe change something? I know you can\'t, but Vegeta DID do something funny with the spell. Wouldn\'t that allow for just the tiniest bit of change? ^_______^

The Rouba is very astute, as she should be. Great wisdom and comfort. I have a feeling you\'ve met your own some where along the way.

I am glad this lady was Vegeta\'s own, otherwise, I don\'t know how much he would have opened up. There needed to be a lot of trust in this situation, and although that isn\'t much of a problem normally for Goku, it certainly could be for Vegeta.

I still have to laugh when Goku and Vegeta \'swap\'. Vegeta scratching his head was just plain funny.

Ah, Poor Piccolo, being tortured by Nail. I have to wonder if Nail and Kami ever think about playing the good cop bad cop with him. :)

O.O I didn\'t know Krillin was still going to be such a jackass. *sighs* I hope he gets over it, but he may not if he is still under the influence of the Kias.

And lastly, POOR Gohan, having to keep watch over his father and Vegeta NAKED. AAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh.

As usual, great chapter, and I am very glad to hear the block has gone away. I have a feeling that a part of you needed to finish on your website, now it\'s free to do other things. :)

The great pixcelgoddess has returned rejoyce!
ENYA\'S ALTER EGO: Look she said she was bummed out with the lack of responce on previous chapters. She dosen\'t deserve her whorship.
ENYA: YES SHE DOSE! (Pulls out a large fish) TAKE THIS! (TWACK!)
ENYA\'S ALTER EGO:o0 EEH! (Falls down flat)
ENYA: TEACH HER!, But I do hpe the mighty pixcelgoddes ruler of all things cool relises how much this story means it is important to all that read it even if they don\'t reviewand the very thought that u wouldn\'t finish your master piece, is unbearible (BURSTS INTO TEARS).
ENYA\'S ALTER EGO: OOOH Where am I.
ENYA: (PULLS OUT FISH) TWACK!
ENYA\'S ALTER EGO:OOOHF!o0
ENYA: (Pulls out hankeyand blows noise) So u see great and devine one u are appreciated, as well as important to every one so please don\'t leave this wonder ful piece of art in the ruins of the unfinished magnum opus archieve.
NOW ON WITH THE REVIEW
1st I DIDN\'T RELIZE NAIL WAS SUCH A PERVE
2nd KRILLIN IS SUCH A PRICK AND HIS WAY OF THINKING IS SO CONFUSING , BUT THEN AGAIN. KRILLIN IS A TWIRP
3rd EVIL CLIFFIE AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
4TH WHAT DO U MEAN GAND V CAN\'T BE MATES OHHHH! I CAN\'T WAIT A WEEK TILL THE NEXT CHAPIE HERE (SHAKES ALTER EGO)
ENYA\'S ALTER EGO: OHH WHERE AM I
ENYA: HERE KNOCK ME OUT(HANDS HERE THE FISH)
ENYA\'S ALTER EGO: GLALY (TWACK)
ENYA: DID I MENTION I LOVE YOUR STROY TO BITTTTS (FALLS DOWN FLAT)

HELLO I\'M BACCCK! ^_^
I WENT ON TO YOUR WEB SITE IT WAS COOOOOOLLLL!
I READ CHAPTER 27 A WONDERFUL MARVEL YET AGAIN FROM THE INCOMPARABLE MIND OF THE GREAT PIXELGODDESS, AHA! I KNOW THOSE DIVIOUS, NAUGHTY KIAS WOULD BE UP TO SOMETHING SOONER OR LATER. >_<
ANY WAY I WANT TO ASK YOU A TINCY QUESTION OH! MIGHTY AND POWERFUL GODDESS (PROSTAITING IN FROUNT OF SCREEN) I WAS WONDERING WILL YOU BE EXPLORING THAT RITUAL U HINTED IN CHAPTER 5 OF QUEST, WHILE VEGETA AND GOKU ARE VEGETA-SIA.
I WAS JUST WONDERING AS I WAS READING QUEST YESTERDAY, I THINK IT WOULD BE COOL TO SEE VEGTA ALL COVERED IN MUD WILDLY DANCING TO A POUNDING DRUM. *g* (BUT ENOUGH ABOUT MY PRIVATE THOUGHTS)
IT WOULD BE COOOOOOL TO SEE WHAT COMES OUT OF YOUR PROFOUND AND EXCEPTIONAL SKILLS ANY HOO! I WILL WAIT HERE (SITS ON THE FLOOR) IN FRONT OF THE SCREEN FOR YOUR RETURN, OH! PLEASE GREAT GODDESS, DON\'T BE CONCERNEDFOR ME ( HOLDS UP A BACK PACK FULL OF PREVISIONS)SEE I COME PREPARED TILL THE NEXT CHAPIE
SEEYA ^_~

This story is so good. I hope that we the readers get to read what the profocy is. Update soon PLEASE!!

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! THEY CAUGHT THAT GOOD FOR NOTHING MEDDLING COCKY STUPID ARROGANT SONOFA%&%$ $%^%^&^% @!#@&*(&*^!!! *staves off the rest of her cursing rant* thank GOD!.......
::falls to her knees:: iye!! I am so very very ashamed!! I have forsaken your story and not reviewed for two chapters!!! Do what you will with me..... *her head hangs* I deserve it...

Do any of these events change what happened in the future?

Oh just what I needed, thank you. Been a little sad this weekend with the universe I write in, so I needed some cheering up, and this is just the ticket. I am very intrigued and can\'t wait to see what happens next.

Ah, what a beautiful story you wove with just this chapter. I loved the feeling of the bar/inn. I think the homey feeling I got from it mostly had to do with Goku finally finding his \'place\' as a sayian and enjoying the atmosphere.

Vegeta certainly was being sage. I enjoy reading him like this. Muwahhahahahahha, yes little bug, he is the Destroyer.

-_- I hate the meddlers, I hate the Kai\'s. lol, I liked Goku wanting to kick the meddlers ass. :)

*scratches head* I wonder how the Prince of this time will get that pearl. I hope it becomes a part of this story.

I was SOOOOOO happy to see you had updated. AND I am going to go check out the site your friend made.