rate_review Reviews

One word: Wow.

That was good reading. I really enjoyed this chapter. Too bad they didn\'t stop that bug.

I hope the soreness in your fingers goes away.

Keep up the wonderful writing.

~Webtester01~

OH pix your good so good.....left me hanging and wanting more. great chapter.

I\'M SO SORRY I DIDN\'T REVIEW CHAPIE25 I KNOW THATS NOT A SUFFICENT APOLOGY
ENYA PROTRAITS HERSELF ON THE GROUND FORGIVE ME GREAT AND MIGHTY PIXELGODDES FORGIVE ME FORGIVE ME OHOHOHHO PLEASE FORGIVE ME.
ENYA\'S ALTER EGO: LOOKS AT ENYA ON THE FLOOR, I THINK SHE MIGHT BE THERE UNTIL U WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER,ANYWAY I THINK I BETTER REVEIW FOR HER SHE LOVED 25, YET ANOTHER CLIFFIE DARN I HATE THOSE.26 ON THE OTHER HAND WELL HOT UNDER THE COLLAR DOSEN\'T QUITE FIT OUR FAVORITE SAYIANS FINALLY GOT DOWN AND DIRTY AGAIN,
CAN\'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT IS IN STORE FOR THEM NEXT.
OH BUY THE WAY COULD U POSSIBLY GIVE US A MORE DIRECT LINK TO THE PICS CAUSE OUR E-MAIL IS DOWN AT THE MOMENT SOME SILLY CONNECTION OR SOMETHIN
SEEYA NEXT TIME ^_^
PLEASE PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE,PLEASE FORGIVE ME GREAT AND POWERFULGODDESS MASTER OF ALL THINGS COOL.
ENYA\'S ALTER EGO: FOR GOODNESS GRIEF CONTROL YOURSELF I\'M SURE YOU\'LL FORGIVE U >_< (THUNDER CLAP) HAAA MAYBE

great chapter but whats with the word \"FUCK\" ^ @ ^

*Is speechless.*

More. I want more!

Uh-oh. I believe there is some underestimating going on with the Kais that are on the planet. Just because their ki levels aren\'t all that high doesn\'t mean they can\'t cause damage, and the meaning of their name \'meddlers\' just adds more to my belief. It\'s amazing what a bunch of rumor mongers can do. The city of Salem comes to mind. *dramatic pause* Words can hold more power than just ki. (hehe, look at me, telling that to an author, oi!) The equation of ki+words, well, that\'s another ball game.

Oh, I really do like all of your discriptions of the planet. The sands and the monsters there. I am not a desert person, but I can see why Goku would wish to stay. Ah, especially if it consisted of nothing but having sex all the time, with the person he cared about. Hunts leading to sex could be added to the routine. *nods thoughtfully*

lol, It was so funny to hear about the wise woman kicking that kia\'s ass out her door. Made me grin.

Oh Gods yes that really warmed me right up, thank you. Geez I just put my fans away todays too! As to the other, Yes cliffhangers are designed to want us want more. And I have to admit I\'ve used them too, I was evil enough to pull one part way into a lemon! At least you finsihed a round any way! And I definitely want more, more, more.

WHAT?! KAI, KAI?! YOU SAID KAI!! HELL NO THOSE FUCKING BASTARDS WILL NOT MESS THIS UP NO WAY NOT EVER!!! GRRRRRRRRRRRRRR..... I AM SO GETTING THAT CREATURE OUTTA THERE!!! KAIS ON VEJITASEI?! WHY?! *pauses to take a furious breath* it\'s been a long time since you gave me a freak-out...... ::makes an anti-kai banner:: KILL THEM!!! KILL THE EVIL BASTARDS, EVERY LAST ONE!!!!! what business do they have on the planet? I really don\'t believe the trading... feh. Vegeta changed his hair? Awesome.... can Goku do it too? Who\'s the prince of the time and why is the moment of history they\'re in so important? Why is Vegeta keeping something secret from Goku and what is it? What would happen if they had to fight? Would they reveal their true power? A KAI?! YOUVE JUST GOT TO BE KIDDING ME!!!! THE TIMING REALLY SUCKS! RAW! ::throws herself into a sitting position:: yes, it was a quick update....... no m&m\'s for you, kai-bringer.... KILL! *twitch*

Argh, you left it there, now I really am going to be on edge waiting for the next bit. Yes please I\'d love to know when. I need something to warm me up seeing Summer seems to have forgotten when it is here! Thanx Fyrbyrd

I DID I DID I DID like it. I loved it and it keeps getting better and better.

I found the hair style with ki thing interesting.

O.O to the Prince at the time being gone.


*growls* Must, kill Kai.... What the heck are they doing on the sayijin planet during this time?