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~Well PG, at last you know my secret! Not only am I seriously disturbed, but am also slightly twisted and a tad demented, sprinkled with a pinch of paranoia and a bit of obsession!~~Just for the record:
there are WAYS to get around a gear shift AND the hand brake. What was the REAL reason people got beetles? Fuel economy my foot! It was for the \'reclining buckets!\' [emphasis on the word \"recline\"] Most were rag tops too....and where was the trunk? In the FRONT of the car. Many a traveller slept in the front boot. Sleeping bags became famous around that time also...for just that reason, remember the commercial? ~~~

I read this chapter...then I had to read it again. Like a fine wine...it must be savored. The care and attention to detail was just mind blowing.

The joy and pain of the reunions:

Nail returning and shocking Piccolo out of his socks...umm,yummy...and in his own body too! and his exuberance in sharing his joy with everyone.

Eighteen and Marron: No one thought he\'d harm his own family...her anger at him...and what she\'d do to him if he ever came back.

Vegeta and Piccolo...how the quest for vengeance turned into price of another beings soul. The way Vegeta looked out for Piccolo and would not allow him to be destroyed.

Vegeta\'s love for his family...and finally Kakorr...

Their reunion and mating...the phoenix! a stroke of genius! and the dragon actually moving! WOW!

Awesome. Awesomely Magnificent. Magnificently Awesome. Wow. and the ssj4\'s: BEAUTIFUL!

The artistry in this chapter is simply awe inspiring! Inspirational! Magnificently wonderful...

Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! Encore! Encore! Encore!

absolutely, positively brilliant I love it from binging to end and I hope I am not the first person to say and outstanding achievement I have only really loved 3 stories in my exploration arround the web and I am pround to say it now is 4 ( maintaining and quest I consider to be 1 even though quest is a sequel)
you\'ve now I think delivered all who read this a masterpiece ( stands up in front of computer and applauds)
with many thanks for the kind answers you\'ve sent my reviews and with great anticipation for the next story what ever it may be, for now take a much deserved rest
Enya of Nexcuss
P.S I hope you haven\'t forgotten about the drum ceremony in a pervious chapter ( can\'t think of it at the moment) would love to see it made a side story of 1 off.

Big happy sigh! Yes Nail back with Piccolo started it, but then you brought in the Phoenix, and I was in heaven. My sign on Kakorr and Vegeta, huge smile, wish I could see it for real and not just in my mind\'s eye, though the description makes a beautiful picture there. Thank you, bows to ground in Japanese way. Off to Syndey on friday, will be interesting meeting Sonny as we share a name, the name I go by is the same as his, and spelt the same. I think I\'ll be nice to him, but if he wants to hide behind Dan Green that\'s okay with me, I write YGO anyway. Loved the way you got Nail in his own body, I wouldn\'t mind who he was paired with as long as he was around, but I like Piccolo/Nail the best. Thank you again, going to sleep very happy tonight

OO! I hope Vegeta gets pierced. That would really make my day. I loved this chapter. I still can\'t get over the moving tatoos. Well, update soon!!

Sorry luv *blushes* i shouldn\'t doubted you at all luv. I loved this chapter it was soooooo hot. if only i could get laid like that :P..

*phew* I was getting towards the end of the chapter (I loved the \'seeing\' ki.. *grins* that was great) and I began thinking to myself... but what about the baby?!!

Well, I am glad I read the comments to reviews. Now I know there will be one more chappie... :)

YAY, dead Kias, Happy Mates... Life is good. *nods*

WHY ARE WE WAITING FOR YOU TO UPDATE ! (IN A SING SONG VOICE) >_<
COME ON THE OTHER CHAPIES WERE DONE QUICKER THAN THIS (GRIPS CHEST) MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS CAN\'T GO ON (FALLS TO THE FLOOR) GOING TO CARK IT......X X
ENYA\'S ALTER EGO : DON\'T BUNG IT ON
ENYA :OOOOHHH! DON\'T SOIL IT
ENYA\'S ALTER EGO : JUST DID HEEHEHEE
ENYA: (GETS UP) BUT SEIOUSLY I BEEN CHEACKING ALL THIS WEEK WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO END IT
(CRICKET CHIRP)
ARE YOU EVEN THERE
ENYA\'S ALTER EGO :HEEHHEHE
FINE I\'LL JUST SIT HERE AND WAIT (SITS AT COMPUTER AND POUTS)

I positively loved this story. I read it in like four days. I can\'t wait until you finish it. I will definetly be keeping an eye out for the rest of the story. You are a very good writer,and I can\'t think of any more words to describe how much I like this story. But I like it very much.

THIS IS GREAT VEGETA HAS DEFEATED THE KAIS AND HE AND HIS KAKORR ARE HAPPY AS THAT IS GOKU IS GOING TO BE OK 0O.....?
BIT THERE IS ONE MORE THING A LITTLE TWIRP BY THE NAME OF KRILLIN WHOM WE ALL DETESTAND WANT MURDERED HORRIBLY ( 0O WELL I SPEAK FOR A MAGORITY I THINK)
ANY WAY WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN TO HIM SOMTHING EVIL WERE ALL HOPING SO DON\'T GO ALL MUSSY YET

Oh wow...well it\'s getting happier! We will have a good, hot, steamy sex scene before the stories over right?...right?! -cling, gives you big, watery puppy eyes- ...right...? Hehe anyways, I love the story, and I\'m sorry for forgetting to review the last chapter! I feel all bad! Anyways, happy writing!