rate_review Reviews

I do love creativity in these fanfictions. I get so tired of reading the same thing over and over. I love the way your handling the Saiyan homeworld. It\'s really cool. I don\'t mind the words meaning at all. They are very helpful. I can\'t wait to see what\'s going to happen next.

That was a well thought out chapter.

Everything is so exciting.

More,more, more.

*glomp*

Yes, I get to use my word of the day! Vegeta is...wait for it....discombobulated! Um, sorry. Anyhow, it\'s really weird that they actually travelled back to a time on the actual planet. I thought, I dunno, that it would be a place created within the room or something. Shows how much attention I\'ve been paying. Sorry to hear about your dog. I\'m gonna go and look at your artwork now.

WHERE HAVE U BEEN! I HAVE BEEN SO WORRIED CRYING EVERY NIGHT WHERE IS CHAPTER 24 WHY HASN\'T SHE WRITTEN IT YET MMMMMWHAAAAAAAA!
ENYA\'S ALTER EGO: DON\'T WORRY SHE\'S GOING THROGH A DIFFICULT TIME TRYING TO GET THE DBZ FRIEZA SAGA ON DVD, BUT SHE\'LL BE FINE ONCE SHE HAS HER COFFEE
ENYA OF NEXCUSS:OOOOHHH COFFFEEE!*SIP* HAAAAA! *_* WHAT A SHORT CHAPIE DARN I HATE CLIFFIES OOOHHH! SUGAR.
WELL I GUESS YOU\'LL JUST HAVE TO MAKE UP FOR IT IN CHAPTER25
EYA AND HER ALTER EGO: AND WE BETTER SEE SOME ACTION OF BOTH KINDS, -_^ GETIT....
PS. SORRY TO HEAR ABOUT YOU\'RE DOGGIE MANY SYMPATHIES, I\'M A DOG PERSON MYSELF.
PSS.I HAD A DIFFICULT TIME TRYING TO FIND THE ART WORK U MENTIONED DO U THINK U COULD POST IT ON CHAPTER25 PLEEEEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE! ^_^...

Oh yeah I\'m enjoying it all right. and I\'m not too proud to kneel down and beg for more, especially when it\'s this good. thanx

Chapter 24 - Arrival

Aww, this chapter was wonderfully described, you have made the whole place sound so realistic, almost as if it could truly exist. Vegeta’s lapse was very understandable, is must be hard to see something that has been taken from you at such a young age.

I look forward to you next update!

I hope they find what they are looking for.

Another wonderful chapter.

Meeeeeeeeh? I don\'t think their bodies copy what they do in the illusion... that wasn\'t what happened when yamucha and them all fought the saiyajins, they just had their eyes closed and stood around like zombies. Eeeeeeeeheeheheheeeee... kissing! They are too sweet. Why hasn\'t anyone on Vejitasei noticed that two power levels of the like that they have never encountered nor ever will again have just suddenly appeared? Are they going to meet a truly mated couple? Who would have that knowledge? Are they going to learn the mysterious and forgotted history of the planet? Maybe another story? *wink*
oh yeah? ::gives one more poke for good measure, then settles herself down to wait again:: *heavy damn sigh*

*for the author* Awwww... your poor doggie died? I am so sorry. I lost my baby boy too, less than a year ago. I still cry for him sometimes. But now you have another one to contend with to help with the pain, yes? I hope you feel better soon. M&M\'s? *gives her a costco sized bag and a big hug*

*claps hands* YAY for the update.

I loved this so much. I understand the feeling of home coming, and you wrote it beautifully. Goku\'s patience was tremendous, and I love him even more for it.

Yes Vegeta, at the moment, you ARE the tour guide, for Goku and everyone reading the story. *grins*

lol about Goku helping Vegeta kick the pointy eared bastards ass, as long as there is no killing involved.

I am so excited about the next chapter, even if I don\'t know what is going to happen.

All the pictures you posted were great. I loved them

I am very sorry to hear about your loss. I am glad you found a new friend.