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This may seem late, but I\'ve recently gotten into DBZ, and just had to read the first story, before getting to this. What can I say on the whole, awesome! Definitely want to read more. Thanj you

NOW I SHALL POKE YA UNTIL YOU FINISH! GRAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! *pounces upon author* What happenssss??!

Ooooh. I love the depth you went into about the saiyan culture. I always wonder how much to elaborate on when I\'m writing my stories. I find it so hard to construct an idea of a society that would give away their children and rely entirely on fighting. I\'m eager to see what happens now. And I want Piccolo to get with someone. Oh! You could kill of crazy Krillin and put Piccolo with 18. 18\'s nice.

i just love how they are together...and i can\'t wait to read about the adventures that they are going to go through....update soon ...

0o what wierd things are going to happen to Krillin the dork i know i know u won\'t tell .><
Any way i love chapter 23 it is so very very sweet. and the story Vegeta told Goku was very fimilar \"wink\" \"wink\" and i know chapter 24 is going to be cooooooooooooooooooooool
CAN\'T WAIT UNTILL THEN SEEYA

I dunno... I think it\'s entirely possible for Celipa to be Goku\'s mom.

She has him early one morning, they go purge a planet that night, and the next morning she asks Bardock when his son was born, having to tell him about Kakarott\'s birth since Bardock gets confused thinking she\'s asking about Radditz.

She\'s saiyan. She probably didn\'t need a whole lot of recovery time, especially when they had the full moon on their side. ^_^

*rubs hands together* YAY, I certainly hope they get the information they are looking for. I also hope that Vegeta doesn\'t get too disctracted. That would be a bad thing.

lol, I know, I\'ve said it before, but I\'ll say it again, I love the way you have Vegeta and Piccolo conversing with one another. FUN!

Chapter 23

So much excitement!  I hope they find the information they need.  And Vegeta telling Kakorr a story was so kawii.  I wonder who they will meet on their trip.

What do you thiink of the colored review?

I look forward to your next update.

hi i\'m back, ENYA OF NEXUSS here, used to be enya.
any ho first up Iso glad you haven\'t given up on the story and sorry i haven\'t reveiwed for agesbut i was dwelling on the inconisitences of life any way I\'ve caught up now OH yes i love the blue black eyes WHAT A FAB IDEA and i love the krillin remark in chapter 21 it was hillarious
BUT NOW I NEEL BEFORE YOU AND SWARE I SHALL FATHFUL AND REVIEW EACH CHAPTER SO PLLLEASSEEE CONTINUE THE STORY

UNTILL THE NEXT CHAPTER SEEYA!

Oh, let the bitch cry. You saw how much she hurt poor Vegeta! Wow, that is brilliant. They\'re gonna go back in time an\' learn about the saiyajins huh? Lol. Y\'know, that\'s a bit freaky because I just happened to watch the very episode in which they faced those psychotic saiayjins no less that a day ago! Wow! I think the vibes are flying. Heehee. *glares* CRY, NINGEN BITCH! You heard her! She said she was gonna leave him anyway! GRRRRAR! I hold to pity for her! O.o Now I don\'t wanna bite..... I just wanna bark. ::mainacle laughter:: Look! More M&M\'s! *munches* ^___^