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::has an insane urge to bite someone:: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaa!! So the truth is revealed!! who will help piccolo with his problems? and er.... what exactly IS wrong? I get the whole having to go through the stage by himself, but, is it back again or something? I am glad that he told vegeta. Maybe now he won\'t be so mean. MEH! no green? awww... of course I didn\'t expect a no. Goku always like to risk his life for the ones he loves. Lol. ::gives author some m&m\'s and goes off to bite something::

Awe, even if the was a very difficult chapter for Piccolo (I think this may also be one of the reasons you had a difficult time writing it) I am glad the green alien could talk about his issues with Vegeta, and that Vegeta was taking the time to listen and actually try to care. (even if he does feel uncomfortable with the whole caring business)

It really does explain a lot. Lol... this whole time Piccolo thought Nameks were asexual, just to find out later he was the expception. It\'s a damn good thing Dende had Gohan and Videl to rely upon. What would happen if the Kami of Earth wasn\'t stable? O.O

hehe, blue eyes, drums, mating. YAY, I am happy to hear some of what is in future chatpers. :)

make them green! Make his eyes green! ^_________________________________^ OMG! he said yes he said yes! SQUEE!! Hey, maybe they could ask the dragon! ^_~ Lol. only kidding. This won\'t be something the kais will toy with, right?

I think Vegeta’s eyes staying the dark, bluey black would be cool. But it’s up to you! Yet another wonderful chapter, I love the way you made ‘Kakorr’ so understanding, this whole fic(more like a miniature novel), has me completely entrance. Please update as soon as you are able, catch you around *waves*

I read this story on whichever site I\'m on when it\'s uploaded and I forgot what I say half the time! Vegeta in a James Brown cape, doing a half split, singing \"I feel good!\" that would be good too! Yeah! He proposed! Now they have to figure out how. Be looking for more, Thanks.

Chapter 20

This is absolutly wonderful.  I hope someone can teach them how to become permanent mates.  Maybe they can contact a saiyan in Other World on how to do it.  The following phrase made me laugh: “Of course I knew,” Kakorr said, smiling and kissing him. ::Did you think I would miss something like that? Even Baka means ‘I love you’.:: lol

I look forward to more.

~Webtester01~

Awe, I really do hope they find the mating ritual. Hmmm, I wonder if the kias\' thought that it was a possible way to destroy Vegeta would they be more willing with the information? Muwahahahahahahahahah. *sighs* probably not.

Goku is so supportive. I do like the dark blue eyes, although at first I was concerned that the ki might be bleaching the irises or causing Vegeta to go blind. I am glad that\'s not the case.

Yes, the should stay blue. I never would of thought of such a wonderful little detail. I knew you\'d find a way to make this proposal so sweet yet not corny at all. I love those kinds.

Sorry about not reviewing in a while, things here have been pretty hectic. So I am just going to review Chap 18 and 19 here hope you don’t mind!

Chapter 18

Aww, I love this while idea. Oooh, Latex kind of sounds like fun! You made this chapter extremely interesting with a well thought out idea, and while I prefer Yaoi, I believe this was a great chapter and look forward to more in the future ^-^.

Chapter 19

Family time! *Sigh* I love the way you give the characters depth and adding in Pete, allowed me to see how much, the healing process has started. I love the constant teasing, its hilarious!

Squee! Trunks and Goten stealing food, that’s so sweet! I wonder if Goku and Vegeta are ever going to become mated? Oh well I will find out eventually. I apologize again for not reviewing sooner. Can’t wait for the next chapter, review you later *waves*

Guess who\'s back, back again, Sarky\'s back, here\'s a review:
Hey, I just got back to the internet and one of the first things I did was come here and read this. Perfect. Of course I\'ve been reading it for an hour now and it\'s dark outside and I have to walk home and I\'m desperate to pee, but hey, Vegeta/Goku yaoi goodness. And the Chichi/Rezu thing was great. It\'s rare for me to like an OC. You rock.