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by Pixelgoddess

person st
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! *sits and waits for the next up date*
Can't believe it! this story is just soooooooooo cool!
Need more!
*gets uncomfortable in sitting position.... sits on Kerris*
Ker... you wait too!rrisrris: Please hurry up and update, SHE'S HEAVY!
ST: shut up chair!
Kerris: *Shuts up*
St: Heheheheheheh.... *still waiting for update* Kerris get used tp this position... you're gunna be in it for a while.
Kerris: *sweatdrops*
LOVE THIS STORY
LUV ST
^_^
person Violet mai flower
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ST get off him. *offers great simpathy to Kerris* he is not a chair, he is a living thing.

to the writer- welll written, well explained, well thought, Et, EXCELLENT plot. Bit slow on the update. crappy reviewers.

all in all i rate your story 4/5

keep it up

person Webtester01
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great!

I'm glad to see Vegeta healthy again.

The welcome home party was very well described.

Looking forwrd to the next update.
person jedimaster107
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I like how you have Goku and Vegeta dealing first with Frieza taking over Vegeta's body and now the brainwashing. I can't wait until the next chaper. I hope there's some Krillin bashing. I hated the way he treated Goku. Ah, have Vegeta blow him up. Keep up the good work! Can you please let me know when you update? Like I said, i can't wait for the next chaper!
person jaygoose
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so terribly cute. Of course that was probably your plan all along. *grins* I am worried about Piccolo though. He needs some love too. But who in the hell is good enough for the Namek. *ponders* *ponders some more* I'll get back to you on that.
person macha
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awe, how cute! I loved this chapter. Vegeta gouding Goku into harrassing Piccolo was funny. Truten letting out Gohan's 'secret'. Chichi and Renzu(sorry about the spelling of her name) Kissing Vegeta's cheeks. Vegeta sending very naughty images to Goku(I would love to see what was being sent, hehe.) I can't wait for the wedding, and I am very happy there is going to be some time (aka chapters) between Vegeta being healed and the Kai's being asses. Thank you so much for the insight to what may be upcoming.

I hope you had fun on your vacation. I was kind of wondering, but hey, everyone needs a break. I hope yours did you a world of good.

P.S. My computer is down, so I may be slow to read/review, and if AFF doesn't let reviews happen, I won't be able to send emailed reviews. *pouts*
person suisheu
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! I have no idea why, but I haven't been able to access this website until tonight!!!! I have been waiting and waiting for weeks without getting to it. FINALLY! Oh, I feel just awful missing all these updates! I just wanna kill my damn computer!! GRR! ::settles down somewhat:: oh no. this is very, very bad. It's almost just likat Vat Vegeta was going through the first time, accept ten times worse... because now he has the trigger to the violence, and it's so hard not to just accidently use it! The way he's living... how much pain Goku must feel, having to keep his mate like that. I had no idea how close he'd really come to attacking bulma and Chichi at their meeting. Has she been working on a solution? Why can't Vegeta interact with the nameks? How much longer until the dragonballs could be used? ::I know, I know, there is more to read, but I still gotta ask the questions anyway::
person suisheu
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well I'd say they had a major problem... feh.
YAY! They found some dragonballs!!! so, when Piccolo went into Vegeta's mind, he got a barrier erected in his head to make him forget that there were dragonballs on new namek? Has anyone else forgotten that? Was it something in Ve's m's memories that caused this? how much more time?! I must know!!! *moves on to next chapter*
person suisheu
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOHHHHHHHH!!! *lightbulb goes on in head* I see!!! It was the KAIS who put up the mind baricades!!! .................. STUPID DAMN BASTARD KAIS!! Why why and WHY didn't they want Vegeta to be free? Healed? Did they want him to kill others just so they could send him to hell again?! YAAAAAAAY!!! ::gets up and does a little happy dance, singing with relief:: FREE!! FREE FREE HE'S FREEEEEEEEEE! Finally and forever! YESSSSSSSSS! *moves on to next chapter, hugging the author on her way there*
person suisheu
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! all caught up now. ^.^ Kill the kais! kill them, kill them all!!! O.o Awwww! They are so cute when they're together like that. I am absolutely awe-struck with how Vegeta's ki is now. So, was goku's becoming less and less because of the influence of that kais? What will Goku do now that he knows they betrayed him so badly? ::wait, he already knows doesn't he:: Who's waiting for the saiyajins? what is going on? NEED-MORE!!! Been deprived of this fic for far too long. *sigh* but alas, I shall once again wait, alw always have.

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