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person kitsuneakai13
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
>.< gah the evilness of the review thing! *pouts* i tried to email my review but i guess it got lost. ^.^ but i loved all the chaps! *curiously* who's waiting for them? *thoughty* iy* it could be their families or the kais. hm, mebe the kais 'cus i don't think they're going to let them heal vege so easily. >.< goku and vege shall defeat their evilness! ^.^ great chap though, i'm glad vegeta is better now. ^.^ now he can luv everybody! *laughs* well mebe not everyone, that would be a little much for vege. great job again! ^.- ja ne!
person maria
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i'm so happy that we can leave or comments on aff...this was a wonderful chapter.i can't wait to read what goku and vegeta are going to do to the kias...and i also can't wait to read about the reunion with vegeta and trunks..please update soon..maria great chapter!!!!
person NuTHoUse
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! Veggies all HEALED!!!!!wwwwwwoooooooo go dragony-balls!!
Great chapter!! Great fic...So all round brilliant.........
....ahem..i'll shut up now *chuckle*
person Webtester01
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!!!

I'm so glad they both were healed.

Looking forward to seeing who was waiting for the saiyan's return.
person En4cerMax
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very intresting. I am very happy at the outcome of this story. Now will Trunks reaction to his fathers homecoming be happy? Or an all out hatred for his fathers absence. Can't wait to read more :)
person enya
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
first time reviewer i am but i have read maintaining and quest i was a bad girl and started on quest but as soon as i read the summury i stopped and read all of maintaing so just wanted to say the story is great and keep it up
person macha
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can imagine that a completely healed Vegeta would be somewhat awe inspiring. I liked the way you described his ki.
Goku being distracted by the kids was a great tatic for the Nameks to use.

I can understand the elders Nameks concern about the kias, now that the Nameks have proven where their loyaties lay. I am hoping Vegeta will get the resprite he wants before things get out of hand, but I do believe a confrontation is inevitable.


YEAH, the wedding and possibly a mating on the horizon.
person Violet
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Claps* you somehow managed to create another wonderfully enthralling chapter! I enjoyed reading this new installment and just wished to compliment you upon you amazing writing skills. I look forward to the next chapter. Pleas update soon. ^-^
person test
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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