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Finally. Vegeta has things out in the open.

Looking forward to more.

nou vegeta! *.* now he's going to kill them! *chuckles* i hope he was admitting to luving bulma (she's so mean!) and not trunks so that he's safe fer now ^.^ *thumbs up* excellent chap! finally they get to tell other people about vege's prob. *thoughtfully* though mebe that wasn't good since it's turning out bad. *hopefully* but mebe he cut himself off in time. >.< but i guess he doesn't have to admit it out loud does he. gah the suspense! *grins* i'll be waiting fer the next chap, *waves* ja ne!

*frowns* gok goku and vege. *curiously* so the ki cuff thingies r like rings? i mean do they wear them like rings or something? *grins* and i suppose it is better that piccolo is alone, he has enough people in his head to keep him busy. ^.^ *blinks* and i wonder why goku's getting weaker, mebe vege is unkowingly taking his ki. or mebe he really did get his energy from his friends. or mebe there's just something wrong with him! *falls over* oh yeah, what if something bad does happen to vege with the restraints, i never thought of that. well i hope everyone stays safe i suppose *grins* but then that would make the fic boring. so bring on the angst! great chap, update again soon! *waves* ja ne!

Excellent!

Morre mre more!

It's ~04:00 here so I'm tired.

Looking forward to your next update.

Also, I wonder if a portion of the brainwashing program got downloaded into Goku.

~Webtester01~

I can only guess at how much of an issue it was for Goku to put his thumbs in those locks. I know he didn't like the idea, because of what he had gone through with them on, but I also believe he 'feels' that Vegeta is currently the strong one and who is going to be protecting who while those things are on Vegeta's wrists?

Once agian, I love the friendship between Piccolo and Vegeta.

It was a very funny story, Dende having a one way argument with the Kias (I am assuming that was because the listener couldn't hear the kais' responses)

This is a really good story, how long did it take you to wright it

Two days.
Two days straight almost not sleeping *can read in my home only at night* to read Maintaining and Quest.
Couldn't stop. Just got here, at ch. 8... *It's 5:00 AM here now* AND I CAN'T WAIT ANY SECOND FOR MORE!!!
Please, don't let a mere hurricane stop you!
*kidding, I realize that's not a very pleasant thing to joke about...*
You achieved, I believe, to do what I never thought was possible: make Frieza be more despicable and hateful than "it"
already are, and you even had to use child abuse to do it!!! Amazing! I'm glad "it" won't be back. But somehow it's a shame
"it" still exists in Hell... Can't they go there and end his misery forever?
And I was thinking, why dont you do a one-shot to that time between Dende, Gohan and Videl at
the Time Chamber? I think it could be hilarious. Could you do it, just for fun? *I'm not a fan of them, just Goku and Vegeta,
but I really think it would be VERY funny to read*
Anyway, keep the good work. o.O O.o o.O O.o

Goku's vulnerability and hurt is very understandable/authentic, and his dealing with it gives Vegeta the opportunity to be a bit protective and supportive (he has learned a lot from Kakorr hasn't he?). Loved the scene with Goku and Chichi - wouldn't we all like a friend like that sometimes? *sigh* Really looking forward to reading the scenes with Vegeta and Chichi, Vegeta and Bulma. Expecting Chichi and Rezu to feed him chicken soup and Bulma not to let him in the house, but this is the goddess we are talking about so wnowsnows?

A love interest for Piccolo? Not sure the story really needs it in fact - he is kind of cool alone. It would have to be someone (male or female irrelevant) on his level ie fairly cool too - self contained, a fighter/sparring companion, clever, undemonstrative, maybe (like him) with a darker past (hmmm and we do want to punish Krillin don't we? hmmm hmmm hmmmm).

Never experienced a hurricane (they have cyclones up north in summer though) - must be scary. Glad you're OK. Please email when you update.

Good, this is what they need to do. Talk. Wait, how did bulma get the backup copies? I thought the tapes were removed. Maybe it would be nice if Goku talked with chichi. I'm very proud of Vegeta for being so willing to sacrifice so much for the sake of his mate. Poor Goku.. he's being betrayed by everyone.

You know, it's almost tradition in DBZ for everyone to hate Chichi, usually she's a raving lunatic, but every once and a while an author makes her a decent person. I like that, I mean she would be the one who would know all of Goku's quirks quite intimately, and she seems to remember that in this story.
Aw, come on, can't all the saiyans play "Kick the Krillin" across the planet? Two points for every country he flies across! *BIG grin* He wouldn't have to die per se, but a couple of injuries wouldn't hurt, would they? At least, not us.
Glad Ivan the Terrible is going to miss you. Why is it that so many authors I like live in Florida? I think y'all do that so you have an excuse not to update! Yeah!