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by Pixelgoddess

person KitsuneAkai13
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*.* wow. *fans self off* that was intense hehe. totally luved it of course. ^.- i'm happy everything is working out between them too. *restlessly* i can't wait to get more into the switching personality thing, it's fun. *thumbs up* great chap once again, keep up the great work! *pleads* an' update soon, i shall be waiting! *laughs* til next time, ja ne.
person macha
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that Goku had the forethought to get himself cleaned up before he went to where Vegeta was at. The lemon would have been somewhat hampered by the fish guts I am thinking, and this is one lemon I am glad wasn't hampered.

The part about him IT'ing to a place that was in thin air was FUNNY. hehe

OH, the drums. I like the sounds of drums. Are you going to put those groups of drummers (I think that they are Japanese) in here some how? I am also waiting for the time when Vegeta learns more about bonding and mating rituals. But... I can wait.

Hope your back gets better soon.
person Velvet Curse
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
haha well you could do that, but then that would make things far too easy for Goku and Vegeta now wouldn't it? i don't like to see them upset but when they are good things always come after eventually. plus if they destroyed Freiza like that who would we have to hate so much? lol course it's your story hehe. keep it up i still love your writing ^^
person suisheu
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Stupid humans and their stupid curiousity! If that person hadn't grabbed Goten's tail he wouldn't have freaked and gotted hurt. wow, I never realized how hard everything was on chichi. I like the way rezu and Chi ended up together. ^_^ She's a much better and happier woman now. I hope vegeta gets through a little bit of all the turmoil goin ins inside him. Hey, if goku can feel and act as Vegeta feels, and sometimes knows what's going on in his head like when he heard Frieza, couldn't he also be affected by the brainwashing? If he's linked to it somehow through their bonds, could he find a way to figure out what it is? Maybe not. Just wondering. sorry... I can't let it go! RR! I want to, but I'm just so worried now that something will trigger it and someone loved will end up dead. mmm...
person macha
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter and littlittle bit of history behind Rezu(?) and Chichi's relationship. It was very endearing.

Had to laugh at the boys who stank like fish. Yes, Goku may be trying to be a better parent, but apparently he still has some stuff to work on. (i.e. make the boys go for another swim before they go home to Ch sme smelling like fish guts.)


I liked seeing that side of Vegeta. (I thought it was very cute, but don't tell him I said that.)
person KitsuneAkai13
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cheers* cool! there's more chaps here than on the vault site. *purrs* so happy i found this place. *blinks* oh, the review. hehe i luved it of course! i really enjoyed maintaining so this is totally cool. it's really interesting so far with the mood switching things with goku and vegeta. and poor trunks feels unluved, so sad. *thumbs up* excellent job on these chaps! *whispers* can i get like an alert or something when u update? 'cus i really wanna read when u put up the new chaps. *smiles* thanks if u can. *nods* so i luved it and it's wonderful. *laughs* haha, ja ne!
person Webtester01
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM

That was a good chapter. Iliked the part where Vegeta helped Goten in the store.


Keep it coming.

person jaygoose
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was very good and not too mushy at all. I like the descriptions of Rezu. I never could picture her in my head before. That was a big help. I loved the little scenes of Vegeta being fatherly. I can so see them. I liked this a lot. I didn't even miss the Geta and Goku loving.
person Velvet Curse
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aaaaw poor Trunks, he\'s so cute i feel so sorry for him. it\'s hard on vegeta too. i think i hate freiza with more of a pashion now than even before lol. well i look forward to the updates, and im sure there will be more and and fun ;) i trust you lol
person jaygoose
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Trunks is so cute! I feel bad for the little man though. He thinks that his dad hates him and no one will tell him what it going on. Not that that would be a good idea but its still sad. Goku isn\'t a bad parent either is he. I read a lot of fics where he was a total failure. I never thought that way though, he just has his own way of doing things.

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