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by Pixelgoddess

person suisheu
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^________^ *big smiles* okay, that was a much better ending. Didn\'t hit me quite as hard. Aww, Trunks misses his dad! I wonder... I know that Veegta and Goku are almost switching personalities of a sort, but where does the extent of influence end? And also, I wanna know what triggers the damn brainwashing! So I\'m probably going to pout because you won\'t tell. *sighs and sits down and waits* that was a very prompt update. YAY! It makes me happy. I gotta have something to read every day. Why does Vegeta feel \"something\" when he sees Trunks, but not when he\'s around Goku or piccolo? He loves Goku and Trunks, i know that. So... how is it different?
person Macha
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was both reassuring and depressing(not really the word I am looking for, it\'s really too strong, but I can\'t think of a better one right now).

Reassuring because Goku loves both the kids and wants them to know it. Depressing, because Vegeta can\'t be there to show Trunks for himself. (I am in total agreement with Goku, I hate that F.B.)

I liked how you wrote the bond affecting Goku. Kind of funny in a way. (haha funny, not strange funny) Goku did come up with a reasonable aliby for Vegeta. He is kind of sick. I wonder if the kids would understand if they found out what was really going on.
person Lizzy
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First off I would like to apologize for not reviewing Maintaining *begs for forgiveness*. Secondly I\'d like to say how much I like this fic already, though you did leave me hanging in chp. one, but you made up for in chp. 2 the conversation between Vegeta and Piccolo was hilarious. oh yeah, and I thought the interaction between Goku and the boys was just so sweet and sad. Love it, love it, and love. Keep up the good work. That\'s the longest review I have ever written *blinks*.
person Webtester01
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM

That was wonderfully written! Goku comforting Trunks was well described. Goten is such an amiable character in that moment. I am looking forwardmoremore of your writing. Anyway I\'m trying to learn php. I hope they find a way soon to remove the brainwashing. A telepath would be able to help Vegeta but it would have to be a very strong one, or a lot of not so strong ones working collectively. Or maybe some kind of anti-virus program could be downloaded into Vegeta\'s brain via an occilating light, into his eyes? Perhaps Bulma could write it. Maybe the program\'s output could be registered by occilations in his ki and interpretid by computer. Well that idea does not involve magic. If not Bulma, someone else smart. Those are my ideas of how it could be done.

person jaygoose
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahh...Vegeta fucking with Piccolo. Oh so refreshing. Heh heh.
person Webtester01
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM

I don\'t know what do say except Excellent!


Keep it up.

person NuTHoUse
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello!!
Wow Vegeta\'s (hopefully) getting back on track and teasing Piccolo while doing it *giggle*
I would like u 2 email me wen u update this fabulous story.
Plez and Thank U
person Velvet Curse
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehehe more yaoi =^_^= thankyou
i can see i\'m going to like this story just as much as Maintaining hehe.
update soon i\'ll look forward to it ^^
person jaygoose
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hurray! More Vegeta/Kakarot loving!
person treana
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really liked mantaining. i finished it a few days ago and came upon this tonight. I\'m not dissapointerd. keep up the good writing. ;)

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