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by Pixelgoddess

person Webtester01
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM

This sequel is very will descibed. Vegeta\'s trust and love for Goku is stronger than ever. Goku\'s little quirks, picked up through the bond, seems to be havin an ever positive influence on their relationship. The constant teasing and bribery between those two is hillarious.


It seems Goku is quite the manipulator. Even moreso than Vegeta. I want to see what happens next when the house is detroyed by their current activities. LOL Anyway it would be kind of humorous if \"the brats\" showed up un expactantly. But then again they probably would get hurt. For all I know they are some \"fun\" of their own. *smirk*


I am looking forward to more so keep up with the wonderful writting! I have a new website now that is currently under construction. The preview ver is is up right now and there is some content that has been posted. The address is: http://www.authorgrid.com so stop by and check it out.

person Macha
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful way to start off this fic! hehe, I didn\'t know Goku had that much of a devious streak in him. I kind of like it. I also like the one word answers he was giving Vegeta while teasing the Prince\'s body. It kind of set the mood during most of the chapter. Sort of a \"I am kind of busy right now, why do you want to talk,\" mood. Not annoyed, just playful.

If I were Bulma, after this, I would builhouse oue out of similar stuff she used for the GR AND put in cameras, but then, I am not Bulma.

Looking forward to the reintroduction of the other characters to this fic.

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