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yet again, loved it. anyway is ur version of ssj4 the exact same except longer hair?like the red body hair and the black mane of hair?
anyway i rilly liked how u used the bond and im confused as 2 who\'s tatoo is who\'s?(dont feel lik checking back lol) vegeta\'s is the dragon? and goku\'s is the earth/tree sort of thing?)

anyway i can c its coming 2 an end but still cant wait 4 the little bit of unexpecteds and cliffhangers that r left >_<
keep it up

-Fav story ever!(second is unconditional bonds ^_^)

WHAT?! Why did you stop?!!! KEEP GOING!!! *latches on to the computer screen as if grabbing the steering wheel of her car and tries to drive the story onward to the next chapter* GO GO GO GO GO C\'MON DURN THING!!! I THINK IT\'S BROKEN!! Ah, dammit! You always do this to us. You build us up to the point of nearly exploding and just when we think we\'ll reach the climax you rip it out of reach!! I should throw my shoes at ya again! I-am-unsatisfied! Actually... I\'m very satisfied.... but you get the point! Tch. Wonderfull graphic. I kinda felt like I was reading in slow motion as Vegeta felt the kais were moving during the fight. It was nice, I must say. Savory. ^__^ The notion of wildly long RED hair sounds appealing. It would be interesting to see such a thing... especially if Vegeta had it tied up in a tail. heehee. That\'s another thing... no matter what there\'s just the teeniest bet of comedy mixed in each chapter somewhere whether it\'s in an action, or a look, a thought or a word. I\'m surprised that Goku has even lasted this long given that he\'s got a hole through the center of his body... it\'s a gruesome thing. Very nice twist, the kais forcing the prophecy to come true all by themselves. Once again, I await the next with baited breath.... but be wary, for I have freak-outs in spades as you well know. ^__~

Yay! Goku\'s safe again. Those damn kais!!! I LOVE THE DRAGON THING!!! As you may haved guessed, I\'m a Dragon lover. I even make Vegeta in my fics have this black dragon power...thing. Anyway, I loved this chapter and I love this story!!! You have to update realllllly soon!!!

*eternal poking*

Awsome chapter. Vegeta was finnally able to get to Kakkor and dealt with the threat to his family, in a swift manner.

I hope current cirumstances improve.

You squished Gregory!!! heh! heh! heh! I guess Bubbles gets blown up with the planet!

As for your SSJ4Vegeta, I\'m drooling already!

~~~Oh, Fried Kais!!! I was really hoping to see the Saiyans auction Krillen off to the highest bidder!!!! BUT there IS a bright side! HEH! HEH! HEH!...Since the Kais were evil and now that they are dead...in what corner of hell will they reside? Or do they simply disappear into oblivion? I sincerely hope not!!! It would be devine retribution for the so called \'Rulers of the Universe\' to be subjected to the same crueltly they handed down to so many innocent beings...a delicious irony: The Saiyans Are Now In Charge! Let the Kaius be subjugated by the same beings that enslaved the Saiyans...in other words: B F\'d by Frieza and the Ginyus!! heh! heh! heh!~~~

I sincerely hope this means all those murdered on Vegetasei will be able to get their lives back!

It would be so awesome to see a tribunal headed by the Royal House of Vegetasei pass final judgement on all those who aided and abetted the Kais in their treachery. And 18 should be able to kick Krillen\'s arse all over the cosmos!!!

This is bloody, and something tells me its gonna get even bloodier before its finally over. The Nameks, the psycological damage done to Kakorr, Gohan and Vegeta...as well as what was done to Rezu, Piccolo, Nail and 18?...Vegeta passed some judgement while rescuing his mate...an eye for an eye, on the mortal plane, they need ETERNAL SUFFERING!!! For what they have done, for the sins they have committed, what the Angered Ascended Saiyan Protecting Providing Prince has done swiftly--that judgement was to save his mates life...Their demise was WAY too merciful...their souls need to be devoured ...slowly...infinitely...forever!!!

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You are one of the first authors I read, and when Maintaining caught my attention--I was hooked! As for punishment...yeah...slow and painful...that\'s the ticket! Remember Ivan Tors? grew up watching those productions! The southern part of Florida is nothing but the Sea of Grass afterall...personally nature can be more brutal than anything we can think of ... I personally think that since you like swift... a pool of piranha or tossed into a frenzy of maribunta [soldier ants] would be rewarding. Could you imagine that being their fate for all eternity...devoured over and over again?...Nature can be extremely cruel. The only difference between the piranha and the moribunta is: with the moribunta...the being has knowledge that he is being consumed alive and has time to think about it as well as scream. Quick sand is nice too. So are gators.

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~~~FREE THE SAIYANS~~~F R E E ~ T H E ~ S A I Y A N S!~~~F R E E ~ T H E ~ S A I Y A N S~~~FREE THE SAIYANS~~~

Yeah! Does little happy dance around the room over the ashes and bits of Kai. Enjoyed the bastards being sent to oblivion! Made the lose of you know who a little better, me and Pic are still grieving...

Hey when your good your good. :P so tell me are you going to write 89 more chaps :O
Yes vegeta did it but at what price. gosh i got the tissues in hand *CRIES* can\'t wait for the next chapter....so get it done already :)

this was sooo powerful! really you are good at this please get inspire soon!

Wow. please update soon!

That\'s it I want those bastard Kais dead in the most despicable way possible! Keep safe from those nasty big winds too.