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by Pixelgoddess

person BlackDragonSoul
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*poke* more!!!!
person cass cass
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m finally reviewing one of your stories. Sorry, I would have earlier, but I started reading this when it already had 40 chapters. I read what you said about SSJ4 and comepletely agree. Red fur is silly. When I saw that episode I reacted somewhat like this:
WHAT THE F**K??!!! HE\'S PINK!!!!!
Anyway, great fic. Keep up the good work!
person BlackDragonSoul
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooo!! Don\'t leave it there! Damn that Krillan!! I always hated him......You have to update really soon, k? E-mail me when you do so i\'ll know.
person mysticbanana
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woof. a ka-new chapter? uber-fabulous. I dont like krillin being so strong though. Oh well. Vegeta will kick his ass in the long run... I hope ^^
person fyrbyrd
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I knew it was only my beloved Nail that died, but still it hurt so bad especially after what they said to each other in the beginning. But see I\'m here! Just call me a masocist huh? Anyway now I want to know what that little bastard is up to now. The trouble with this story is that when I meet Sonny Strait in October I might not like him!
person ~anz~
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry i could\'t come up with any new metaphors, but hey i did give some very interesting ways to stamp out the horrific homicidal homophobe... a pool of pirannahs is too good for the demented demigod...he must be punished, made an example.

Rage is the order of the day: Rage and Revenge!

Vengeance of the Prince...[can\'t wait to read your description of them in ssj4 mode....*drools* hot, hot, hot]

...and what of shin and his supposed love for gohan? did he program him too? when he took him to that planet?

oooh! can\'t wait to find out!!!!
person Maccam
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>.< NONONONONONONONONONONONONONON WTF KILL KRILLIN NOW THAT LITTLE BASTARD >.<
POOR PICCOLO AND NOW VEGETA wtf I HOPE THE kIAS JUST DIE...DAMNIT UPDATE ALREADY.(tissues are in my hand now)
person ~anz~
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what an evil little gnome. he just decided to kill everyone...

kakorr\'s injured...chichi and the baby are badly shaken ... and rezu\'s dead...

hell hath no fury like an enraged saiyan prince and a deranged namek.

[lucky it\'s not me seeking revenge...i\'d tie him to a pole and skin him alive. put a vehicle on each of his limbs and draw and quarter him...slit his belly...nail his intestines to a pole and have him run in a circle...dragging his entrails behind him!]

Killing him and putting him out of his misery is WAY too easy...he HAS to suffer:

DRAW AND QUARTER THE SAWED OFF LITTLE SHRIMP! NO...WAIT! PUT THOUSANDS OF LITTLE CUTS ON HIM AND STAKE HIM OUT OVER A FIRE ANT HILL!!! BURY HIM UP TO HIS NECK IN THE SAND AT LOW TIDE...AND WATCH THE TIDE ROLL IN!!!

something hideous and very painful... something that gives satisfaction...like skinning him alive and then reaching inside his body and removing his heart and SLOWLY devouring it as he watches...
person Suisheu
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It ran through goku?! THROUGH HIM?! What the hell is he doing!!! he\'s gonna KILL HIM! Nu! that is unacceptable! Why didn\'t Vegeta come immediately when Goku called? What\'s gonna happen to Piccolo now that a third of himself, in essence, has been destroyed? Is he okay, like, mentally? you mentione that Krilling was able to utilize the powers of the kais, but... Goku is a million times stronger than King Kai! how much worse could all of them be together?! How could Krillin\'s body sustain such an amount of power without exploding? What\'s wrong with the baby? Is Rezu gonna die!!? Y.Y save someone, here!!! *starts crying hysterically* This can\'t get any worse!!! without mentioning the \"F\" word.... heh.
person Macha
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, what a predicament. To not be able to power up your ki because the baby may hurt Chichi. You left at such a place, I don\'t know whether to think Goku is dead though. Or Rezu. SFK

I am very sorry Nail died. That really sucks. I find it interesting Krillan thought he was killing Piccolo though. Hmmm, I wonder how that will play into the sceem of things.

I am so waiting for your next update. This was an evil cliff hanger. :)

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