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by Pixelgoddess

person Lee
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ic seems you had everything thought out nicely, anyway great chapter i rilly lik the fact that no1 can rilly power up 2 stop him without hurting the baby so it should be quite the battle between vegeta and krillin if he even gets there in time :O

Keep up the good work and when the time comes make sure krillin dies nice and slow :D
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know I haven\'t reviewed in a while, and I apologise...ALOT! Lol. Omg...poor Green-Bean! What\'s gonna happen next? Goku and Vegeta will be okay right? And Truten, and the baby GIRL?! -clings to you- Oh please let Chichi and Rezu be okay! And of course Vegeta. And what is this about a prophecy? Hmmm? -taps foot- Yeah...you wont answer yet...but we\'ll eventually find out! Bwahahahaha! lol jk. Kinda. Anyways, can\'t wait for the next update, love all of your works!
person Kugatsu
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*escapes from cage, pounces on Krillin and rips him apart*

YAY! *wipes blood off hands*

DIE DIE DIE

I can\'t believe you\'re doing this! T___T
person Webtestet01
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 41 & 42

Krillin is one crazy monster now. And those Kais... I hope someone eats them alive and makes the pain last as long as possible..... mayby they\'re not worth it.

You really know how to make a reader really HATE a character or characters. >:D *Muaaahhaaa* *crazyness ensues*
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I could never stop loving you! you write such good fics! lol jk about the fics part, but you do write good ones. Oh no! Rezu! -cries- I shalt miss thee! I hope Veggi-sama gets there soon, and poor Goku and Chichi, Tama was all freaking out. That was interesting, and yes now that you mention it I do remember the prophecy. And yeah, if they had just left it alone, nothing probably would have happened. Mwah! I love this chapter, I can hardly wait for another one you beautiful beautiful writer you!
person allusnine
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for the next chapter.
person Fyrbyrd
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay it took me a few days to get back after reading this the first time and fleeing in despair! My other boys... gone. I let go of the rope this time and got dashed on the rocks below. I will stay to read more, but ow it hurts! Don;t want to lose the other two!
person ~anz~
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 41...

Once again you have managed to suprise and amaze this fascinated reader. ;)

It\'s wonderful that Piccolo realizes that he and Nail feel the same...

Krillen\'s a whore...he sold his soul for power...the megalomaniacal murdering midget!!!

The Kais approved of his murdering his wife? They caused the deaths of countless women and children? They allowed a child, a helpless child, to be the sex slave of a sadistic alcholic pedphilic perverted psychopathic bloodsucking freak?

What kind of gods are they? FALSE ONES!!! SEE the have made a mistake....

Just who has the mad one slain? Is it Piccolo? Or is it Nail?

Oh! the suspense!!! I LOVE it!!!

Thanks again!
~Anz~
person Macha
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O You have certainly managed to make Krillan one piece of deranged work. I can\'t believe he killed 18 and now Piccolo. AAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

I am just hoping he isn\'t going to go after Chichi and the baby. Of course, they would be a perfect target, I just don\'t know if it would be a wise move for him to do so with both Goku and Vegeta alive at the moment. Eep.... that would mean they would have to be dead. *glares* I wish Krillan would hit his head or something.

*sighs* Excellent and intense chapter. Glad to hear the next update isn\'t that far behind.
person Lee
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter the only thing i didn\'t lik is how krillin is so powerful from the kais when the supreme kai was shock by a ssj2 during babadi saga :S
anyway i think most ppl knew krillin was gonna do sumthin jus not 2 the point of actually hurting any1 let alone killing piccolo :P

anyway hope krillin dies very slowly by the hands of vegeta :D
keep up the good work

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