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yay! i\'m so happy you updated, i\'m just curious abot piccolo and nails!

I loved this chapter.

Goku would make and excellent Rouba (Sorry, can\'t spell that yet.)

Chichi’s surprise was sooooo well orchestrated. I loved it.

Oh no. I didn’t know Piccolo and Nail were still being so friendly. If I had known, I may have found it entertaining (have I mentioned I love lemons?), but I have to think I would have had the same thought patterns as Vegeta on the matter after a while. It’s not quite healthy, is it?

I am glad to find out the tattoos can’t be activated by anyone but their mates. That would certainly become a handy cap in a fight.

The whole scenario with the kids’ ki making the baby hyper was so well thought out. It really does make since. I am also happy with the name for their daughter. :smiles: I am glad Vegeta didn’t find it offensive.

That\'s almost funny.

Wonder if tenji888 is planning on leaving bad reviews for all the other 667 other DBZ stories on here.

Hope not, because even that review was a waste of time. :P

u know.........i WAS just going to go and read this anyways........but i\'ll just save it to my \'favorites\' list and go read your other one........just to make you happy. >.< ok. so cyu whenever i finish....the other one!

Chapter 39


Wow. I only have one word, Madame Balladeer, that can do this chapter justice: Amazing. Simply amazing...actually that\'s a phrase. This is the word:

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(The war begins very soon, so hang tight. And keep those tissues handy.)


Pix\'s if i have to go toi work with *BAGS* under my eyes because something is going to happen to them >.< .....*CRIES* thats not fair...~_~

I\'m running out of tissues you know!!!!!!!

Well actually I think I\'m in heaven right now. MMMM that was good. Thank you very very much. As for me I\'m much better, must be all those stupid years of smoking catching up with me, but I\'ve been clean for six years now, funny how that coinsides with how old my son is, huh? Ta muchly waiting for more, love that lemony goodness

Woah. *eyes fall out of head, roll onto floor, and fall down ventilation grate* 83 chapters? This is officially the LONGEST fanfiction I have ever read!!!! (yes, that sentence did deserve 4 exclamation marks). And after all that torture, MATES!! Yes!!!! (that probably deserved only two, but okay). Keep updating!

*heen* Ah, this chapter makes me soooo happy. It was beautiful and erotic. Nice combination. Usually, lemons have the erotic thing down pat, but the beautiful part of this one comes from the happy shared emotions the two were displaying. I loved it.

Thanks for the warning. lol, I\'d hate to go from this chapter to the next with an, \"And Suddenly, out of nowhere come the Kia\'s.\"

Happy, mated sayians. *grins* The ki flares were great.