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for The Prey

by Akuryours

person Alex
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've enjoyed what I've read so far. But there were a few jarring inconsistancies. Watch your spelling and word use.

Smelt=refining process of netals. Smelled=past tense of smell.

Other than that, your idea is very pleasant and you show great talent.

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