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Hey there Rim!! Its me Jen, thanks so much for emailing me for youyr update, i just read the whole story again and all i can say is OMG!!

Its painful for everyone involved you know, the ending made me cry, Tala killed kai wcich is prolly no most certainly for the best as it is and yet i feel sorry for the sick bastard >.<. I'm so HappyTakao survived and Sarutobi too, too bad he lost his sister.

As it is this story is one of the best angstdark stories ive ever read! I loved all of it, the dark moments were heartbreaking and yet you managed to put lighter tones throughout the story aswell.....Hope you keep on writing. I'd love to read more stories from you.......let me know okay!

x
Jen

damn review got broken off O_O), anyway what else i did say was that this story was very well written, the dark anbgsty parts were heartbreaking and yet you managed to weave lighter tones throughout the story.

I have enjoyed readin g this a lot and i hope u keep writing stories, i'll read them!!

*crying* My poor baby KAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't believe you killed him. I wish he could have gotten help and gotten better Tyson did love him right????? HE BETTER HAVE!!!!!!!! I wish Tala, Kai, Tyson could have all gotten better and been in love!!! :( oh well but I still can't believe you killed my baby. I love this story keep writing you rock

Love the fiction plaease update

Hey,

Don't worry that it isn't long, I'm just glad you updated. I will still remain a faithful fan. Hoping that the ending isn't too grave. ^.~ Great job anyway. Catcha' later.

-Kami

I HATE YOU!!!! *cries* How could you be so mean to poor Tyson!!and Kai is not evil he's just misuderstood and your making him into a complete Bastard. ANd if you even think aout putting Tyson and Tala together I'll hurt you!! *cries some more* Ok I'm done it is a good story I love it but plz don't make Kai die or somthing so you really hate him that much?

OMGmkai is such a bastard here grrr i wanna lkill him despite me being a rabid btyikafan i really think he lost it and i hope tala cando something and sarutobi too!!

PLS will umemail me when u update this???It would be so cool if you could!!!

very interesting read ^^

Hope you update soon... like... SOOOOOOOOOOOOOON

I hope you conitnue with your story and allow us further pleasure in reading this!

great job with this. It's a bit... too angsty, but it's all good! ^^

I think you're story is great!!! However, the amount of abuse Tyson takes is pretty sad. I can't help but feel sorry for him. Although, Tyson and Kai did have a Ike & Tina Turner moment in the car. The whole "Don't make me take my hands off this wheel!" was funny, in a sadistic way. But anyway, keep it up. I like this story and I'm really glad you updated!!!