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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I\'m not done with the chapter yet but I just had to comment. Ian was so cute looking up at them and blinking, and then Bryan wiping the pancake off his nose and eating it! Aww I just love them to death! ^.^ Spencer and Tala just add in a little bit of flavor and there you have it! That is why they are my all time favorite team. Although I can\'t say the same for, My-Name-Is-Kai-And-I\'m-Going-To-Be-A-Bastard. I\'m sitting here going,\"DON\'T DO IT!\" and yelling at my computer thinking, \"What is he going to do now?\" it\'s quite funny actually. Poor Tyson. T.T I\'m pretty sure I read your sisters story awhile back because it all sounds to familiar. The Kai being a jerk to Tyson thing I mean. Well this is the longest review I\'ve ever left on AFF and am glad it was for such a great story. I have a really angsty story on ff about Bryan getting drugged and raping Rei....Kai is evil in that too. But so is Tala. My account name is KamiaKotai if ya want to check it out. Anyway I\'m going to continue reading now and finish off this chapter and move on from there. Catcha\' later.
-Kami
I\'m not done with the chapter yet but I just had to comment. Ian was so cute looking up at them and blinking, and then Bryan wiping the pancake off his nose and eating it! Aww I just love them to death! ^.^ Spencer and Tala just add in a little bit of flavor and there you have it! That is why they are my all time favorite team. Although I can\'t say the same for, My-Name-Is-Kai-And-I\'m-Going-To-Be-A-Bastard. I\'m sitting here going,\"DON\'T DO IT!\" and yelling at my computer thinking, \"What is he going to do now?\" it\'s quite funny actually. Poor Tyson. T.T I\'m pretty sure I read your sisters story awhile back because it all sounds to familiar. The Kai being a jerk to Tyson thing I mean. Well this is the longest review I\'ve ever left on AFF and am glad it was for such a great story. I have a really angsty story on ff about Bryan getting drugged and raping Rei....Kai is evil in that too. But so is Tala. My account name is KamiaKotai if ya want to check it out. Anyway I\'m going to continue reading now and finish off this chapter and move on from there. Catcha\' later.
-Kami
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I love your story it's one of my favs. Please update soon! ~Skye
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your story!!!
keep on! ^^
keep on! ^^
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I waited for anciosa for that chapter.
And I was not disappointed!!!! I adore the personality of Bryan and Kai it was wonderful and cruel....
Tyson is so cute suffering.... Tala is a sweet passionate fool.. and I am liking story more and more.... Thanks for the update! I am happy!
And I was not disappointed!!!! I adore the personality of Bryan and Kai it was wonderful and cruel....
Tyson is so cute suffering.... Tala is a sweet passionate fool.. and I am liking story more and more.... Thanks for the update! I am happy!
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor Tyson *cuddles him* i feel so sorry for him, thats so sad, kai is such a bastard in this >.<
I hope the butler can help him before its too late and Tala is a lot smarter than Bryan thinks *sighs*
update soon plz
Liah xx
I hope the butler can help him before its too late and Tala is a lot smarter than Bryan thinks *sighs*
update soon plz
Liah xx
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God, you made me cry!!!
Please keep the story but, give us some hope...
Please keep the story but, give us some hope...
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ummm was that the end? but.......im confused.....lol it was really good but i feel as if it needs more.....you know? anyways good story!!
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man are you really gonna make us wait for an update. Please get the next chapter up soon. I\'m dying here. I love this story. Please carry it on and get Tyson outta that maniac\'s hands and into Tala\'s.
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pease update, please update, please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I HOPE YOUR GONNA CONT WITH THIS!!! I was nearly crying cos of Tyson bless him! cmon Tala do something!!! *pulls hair due to stress* ARGH!!! please cont!!! its really good i cant wait to see what happens. you cant just leave it i need a happy ending... otherwise im gna be scarred for life!! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeeeeee?
Liah xx
Liah xx