rate_review Reviews

I was so immersed in this that I stayed up to finish it and I have no regrets. I love it and as you wrote more, it got better. The feeling was not lost and it was powerful enough that you didn't need too much details to get the effect...the emotion accross. Bravo. Your an awesome writer. Thank you 

This was so amazingly good I wanted to cry, I loved this story so much thank you for making it ;-;

Wowww this is the best damn story I have read in a longggg longgggg timeee...it's so intense..but I LOVE it! Wow..pleaseee continue!? It really is amazing!

I\'ve always gone past this story and never got the chance to read it. I just finished it and I must say....wow! Your writing style and details in this story are amazing. You made the characters perfect! Vegeta\'s personality is great and the way you made him and Goku struggle through this horrible ordeal was really somthing to behold. Not once did I find myself bored with story and I was always asking...what next?! I know it\'s hard to tell yourself \"I\'m going to write an angsty story that is dramatic and sad all the way through,\" but you did it and made the story great. I loved the ending. I loved the whole thing! Great stuff, and I\'ll be reading more of your work in the future.

Wow! Oh, wow!!! I love this!!! *grins like a kid in a candy shop* ^^;; Absolutely amazing plot line, with very realistic (and not to mention simply spectacular) characterizations and descriptions. *gives you chocolate* ^__~ I can't wait to find out where you take this -- keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!!

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uve taken AGES!

wow...

continue please!

update!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

i really enjoy this story. its dark, but its not filled with disgusting details. its a true story. i believe that that is how the characters would act when faced with this situation. Goku and Vegeta are stuck with this together, they have to deal with it together, however reluctant Vegeta may seem, he knows deep down that he needs to help Kakarot and that Kakarot needs to help him.
its not plain and its not simple. but its not totally cluttered with unnessicary facts and information that just confuse the reader. the way you describe things keeps me entertained and immersed in this story.
i can garantee you that i will not stop thinking about what is next to unfold until i see a new chapter posted.
i am waiting for that day....
i have found love, this story.