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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is an intense chapter (5).
I\'m glad they are back on the healing path. :)
Keep up with the wonderful writing.
I\'m glad they are back on the healing path. :)
Keep up with the wonderful writing.
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh...broken people...mmm
I enjoyed the change of pace from the PWP. I hope to see a new chapter soon. But not before you do that damn report. I procrastinate enough reading these things, I don\'t need anymore updates to encourage me!!
I enjoyed the change of pace from the PWP. I hope to see a new chapter soon. But not before you do that damn report. I procrastinate enough reading these things, I don\'t need anymore updates to encourage me!!
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December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really love this fic...
So keep up the good work
So keep up the good work
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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi,
this is unreal! I couldn\'t tear myself from the computer screen. It\'s sad that i can\'t read the fifth chapter because the stupid library cenzores it, but the prevoius ones... Oh, this is the work of genius! Thanks a lot for writing this! (Damn now i have to find a normal computer with normal access to the internet to read your story further.)
this is unreal! I couldn\'t tear myself from the computer screen. It\'s sad that i can\'t read the fifth chapter because the stupid library cenzores it, but the prevoius ones... Oh, this is the work of genius! Thanks a lot for writing this! (Damn now i have to find a normal computer with normal access to the internet to read your story further.)
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I absolutely loved this chapter! One of the best stories I\'ve read!
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was really a close call. I am glad they are \'safe.\' I do have to wonder if the aliens didn\'t succede though. Maybe not the way they had planned, but it looks as though the two remaining full-blooded sayians may have been broken beyond repair.
Will this story continue and go into depth about how the three of them deal with what happened, and how everyone around them deals with what they are told happens?
If this was the end, it was a very good fic., but I hope you continue with the repercusions.
Will this story continue and go into depth about how the three of them deal with what happened, and how everyone around them deals with what they are told happens?
If this was the end, it was a very good fic., but I hope you continue with the repercusions.
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5
I like the way you portray Vegeta\'s thought process, as he awoke to the surroundings of his home. Goku also seems to out of his mania for the moment; it is going to be a long healing process for both of them.
Trunks may need the most therapy; Gohan seems to be providing that to some degree. The torment of being forced to watch your father tortured onscreen, and have it replayed over and over must be horrible, to say the least.
Regarding the video(s), Bulma must have witnessed the cruel goings-on, and possibly seen Trunks reactions on another video.
Great story! Keep up the good work.
~Webtester01~
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Didn´t think you´d actually manage a vaguely happy twist for the story was quite angsty... but you did. And I liked it. And I´d like more... more I say! ;p
Is there gonna be another chapter? You are good with writing about feelings, emotions etc. Very well done!
~sinningia~
Is there gonna be another chapter? You are good with writing about feelings, emotions etc. Very well done!
~sinningia~
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t worry. There was still angst in there. Not as much as the first three chapters, but it was still there. I am happy you have continued with the fic!
Well, Piccolo had at least two good ideas. One, having Vegeta fight him. Two, bring the rabbit back alive.
Awe, Trunks and Gohan!
Well, Piccolo had at least two good ideas. One, having Vegeta fight him. Two, bring the rabbit back alive.
Awe, Trunks and Gohan!
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes this is the best story yet and im glad vegeta and goku will be ok. i don\'t know what i would do if they had to die or something