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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a surprise, to see the rescue.
I wonder what Vegeta\'s response, will be when he wakes up. And what will be Goku\'s new behavior since his breakdown?
More!
~Webtester01~
I wonder what Vegeta\'s response, will be when he wakes up. And what will be Goku\'s new behavior since his breakdown?
More!
~Webtester01~
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i see some gohan and trunks love or maybe it\'s not be the love i see it as. i also see some tough times ahead goku and vegeta maybe to broken to save and they may just give up though i hope it doesn\'t come to that. anyway i like your story so hurry and write more.
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Stares in awe* I liked the addition of Trunks POV, your style of writing really capture\'s the pain felt by the characters. It was an unexpected twist having them rescued... I am looking forward to the next chap! ^_^
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Such an intense story - The rescue was a surprising twist, but I fear it was too late for Goku. An interesting thing I noticed - and I am not sure if it was deliberate...Trunks never referred to Vegeta and Bulma by anything but their names. Never as his parents. So which Trunks is this? Glad you updated, but I just know this won\'t be a nice ending story.
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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic has me slightly confused, and yet greatly intrigued. I hope you update soon. I really would like some clarification on what’s happening though…
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November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I like your writing style... you\'ve gone and got me hooked now! ^_^
Looking forward to the next chap!
Looking forward to the next chap!
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October 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAA!! Oh, I hope there is more.... whether to release Goku from his misery as he released Vegeta or what I'm not sure... You have surely succeeded in your attempt at angst - oh kami, more than succeeded. There can be no happy resolution to this but there can be closure. Was Trunks there? was the voice all in Goku's mind - or had Trunks found a way to free them only to have Vegeta die before his eyes... gees - I'm never going to get to sleep now...
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So sad, so depressing...but I like it. There won't be a positive resolution to this - there can't be. Vegeta is/was broken, but he understood more of what was going on - knew the reasons things were happening. With Vegeta gone, Goku won't have anything to cling to, and I expect to see the last shreds of his sanity vanish, hating himself for what he has done. (And are you playing mind games with us? Are these events real, or just part of a fevered imagination?)
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow.! That is angsty!
If you're going for more torm you you could make that action a nightmare.
Or if you are going for character death, then not.
Life sure is short, aint it.
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh.my.god.You.are.pure.evil!!! ^-^ How could you stop THERE?! *grins* I´m glad though, that you update fast enough for me to survive this cliffhanger... somehow I`m glad for what you had Goku do... Vegeta could have never recovered.. even IF they were to be freed... anyway, and just sit here ans see what you have up your sleeve for the next chapter... Anything is possible, isn´t it :) Thanks for another great, angsty chapter! ~sinningia~