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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* Well, I have to admit, I am really unuse to a DBZ universe where somethings are just impossible. To the point that even Goku sees that it is useles res resist. Nowoulwouldn't have wanted Vegeta to go thh anh another multipul rape, something else even worouldould have happened. You are taking angst into a little known realm here; it's called futility. (Not to be confused with fertility)I never thought I would see the day that even Goku felt his situation was so totally futile that he would accept Vegeta's request to kill him.
*sobs*I keep wanting them to wake up or something.
As usual, I am waiting for your update.
*sobs*I keep wanting them to wake up or something.
As usual, I am waiting for your update.
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
no! vegetas dead!!
poor goku.
Great chapter. sad but great *sob*
poor goku.
Great chapter. sad but great *sob*
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please don't let Veggie dead!! His life has always been hell,it can't all finish like this...Anyway great chapter, so emotional and sad.
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! that's horrible! I think that death was the best option for Vegeta. I don't like to see him like that. but poor Goku.. what will become of him now? God, Vegeta was in such an awful state. But I'm glad he's freeom pom physical pain. What about Trunks? will those people in white turn on Goku and begin to torture him until he too goes insane?
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why? Why did Goku Kill Geta? He's supposed to save him. I really like the fic, but now I'm upset. Please have a happy ending. Please, I'll beg if I have to. Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Pleasleaslease, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PS: 5/5
PS: 5/5
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Arrrggg! You tell me that AFTER I read about Vegeta dying! *Is tempted to Galic Gun you*
All I saying is this better end happy, 'k? It's giving me nightmares, really.
Phhhhhhaaaa. Okay, rave is over. Another scary, discriptive and naughty chapter! Please more, so I can either have different nightmares or stop them?
All I saying is this better end happy, 'k? It's giving me nightmares, really.
Phhhhhhaaaa. Okay, rave is over. Another scary, discriptive and naughty chapter! Please more, so I can either have different nightmares or stop them?
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I did like reading this story from Goku's point of view. I am still not certain that 'like' is the correct word to use, because I don't 'like' seeing the sayians in the predicament they are in. I think 'intrigued' is the word I am looking for. (Maybe not.) You are still writing the angst well.
I would have to say 'they' are managing to mess with Goku's head just by messing with Vegeta. He doesn't like seeing ppl he likes hurt so this must be really bad for him. Especially when he ends up being the one to do the hurting. I like the point that was made by him admiting that he wanted to REALLY kill something, even if it was only to hif. f. That would be an almost breaking point for him, it's not somewhere the usual Goku likes to go.
This is a good story, and I am glad it didn't turn out to be a one chappie. I'll be waiting for the answers (via reading updates)
I would have to say 'they' are managing to mess with Goku's head just by messing with Vegeta. He doesn't like seeing ppl he likes hurt so this must be really bad for him. Especially when he ends up being the one to do the hurting. I like the point that was made by him admiting that he wanted to REALLY kill something, even if it was only to hif. f. That would be an almost breaking point for him, it's not somewhere the usual Goku likes to go.
This is a good story, and I am glad it didn't turn out to be a one chappie. I'll be waiting for the answers (via reading updates)
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's very interesting so far. the unstable state of mind of Vegeta, the way Goku is trying to take care of his tortured companion....so much angst!!!!!
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes, another great chapter. I love this story! I really do! I wonder what´ll happen next... A very twisted and very well-told fanfiction... and seeing Vegeta so vulnerable. I don´t think he´ll ever get back to what he once was after that. One question though: Is it going to be a long story? I just wonder... ^-^ ~sinningia~
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Doing good! I hope they escape... It'll be good to have Goku have to bring Vegeta back to sanity and health while still having to hide. Only thing is, how're they gonna free Trunks and yet not have him interfere with the limey goodness and plot? You're not allowed to let anyone die! Except for the evil buggers that imprisoned them.