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by Spacefille

person sinningia
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really hope you DO continue this. It is interesting to say the least. Furthermore you understand it to create suspense and an overall darkness. The athmosphere is very angsty so far ;) and I like the feelings and emotions you described. You have an awesome way of writing and with the way you keep the scenery and any previous happenings so vague, only feeding them bit by tiny bit to the reader, you arouse curiousity and make the read worth it. I was actually sad when it ended. Didn´t expect something like that to turn up today ;) ... Very nice!!! Keep writing, please.
~sinningia~
person macha
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is this only a one chappie? I hope not. I want to know the when, where, how's and such that made this possible. You did give some answers, but not enough to really get a good idea about it. Lost is an appropriate title. (Sorry about the spelling.)

Your A/N said that this was a practice in angst. I think you did very well.

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