rate_review Reviews

We already know what's going to happen. Arina sleeps with Gohan, gets pregnant by GohGokuGoku finds out and is broken-hearted. I can see this coming a mile away. Why did you title this story Goku & Arina when its not even about them at all. You need to change it to Gohan & Arina since they'e the ones who are having a relationship and not Goku and Arina. You really shouldn't decieve your readers like that. I really thought this would be a Goku & Arina story. I guess I was wrong. It was fun to read while it lasted.

Oh no!! Of all people to run into, why did it have to be Gohan! Arina gonna mate with Gohan for sure! Poor Goku, he's going to be so heartbroken. Awaiting the next chapter!!

Awww, man!! I hope that those two can work things out soon. Hurry with the next chapter!!!

Oh Wow!,Wow,Wow!!!
I could actually imagine the fan-fict in my head!!!!!
This is really good...The storyline and everything...
Please keep continuing and don't stop!!!! (Also will Chi-Chi be comming back into the picture? I hope so,then there may be a cat-fight between Arina and Chi-Chi!!!!!!)
lol i can't WAIT for your next chapter!!!!

For a first fic, this is really, really good. I was so suprised to follow my link and see an update. Please keep going!

the chapters are short, the story line is good.(between the characters)
but there is no sex or lemon yet.
and it dosn't follow the story line of dragon ballz.

Awesome!! Arina is a saiya-jin!! Talk about lucky!! Hurry with the next chapter!!

Wow!!!! this sounds really promising...it does suck that chi chi dies but hey thats how it goes...Can't wait for the sex scenes :P

This story definitely has promise!! Please continue!!!