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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, normally I'd say it's your bad luck that the most critical fanfiction reader was your first reviewer... But! This is a very interresting piece so far! I'm amused to find myself liking a story where Vejita is soooo Out Of Character! It's really sparked my interrest! If at all possible, can you email me when the next chapter is posted? I have found only one problem, one mistype... Don't remember where it was, so it obviously wasn't that bad.... Perhaps make the chapters longer, but I really like where this story is going! Please please email me when it's updated!