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for Come Together

by chayron

person schu-was-here
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo!!! This story was a blaaaaaast!!!!!!!! >o< I loved it! Especially Gokuu\'s, Veggie\'s & Ahrae\'s interaction - it was so damn cute. Smack! Smack back! Growl. Roll eyes. Stick tongue out. So fuuny! I laughed hard at those^^ And the lemons... damn, you know your job well^^ I think that were the most imagination-triggering moans and grunts ever put into words... or letters ;p Yeah, the story rocked. Ah... i wanted to write something else....but i forgot ^^; Aaaanyways.. Love your fics. Gonna read some more from AFF ^^
person bob
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so mean, teasing me about that sequel!! I can\'t wait to read it, keep writing I luved this story.
person Kugatsu
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, Okay. I didn\'t like the ending but I loved the whole entire fic so I\'ll forgive you...*shifty eyes* FOR NOW! MWA HA HA!

Keanu Reeves is that jack ass from teh matrix. all he ever says is WHOA...
person BballAnimeLover89
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lookin forward to the sequel! Great job on this story too! UPDATE SOON!!!
person kit-kit
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oohh nice story i can\'t wait for the senquel. i hope ahrae gets to stay with vegeta and goku after the baby is born and the two sayains that are in town are there the ones who was in noyran based.
person Webtester01
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great ending!

I look forwrd to the sequel.

person josie
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! I mean that\'s all i can say. Well that and please don\'t keep me waiting to long for the next chapter! good work!!
person kit-kit
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter trunks is saved and well i just hope ahrae wont die.
person BballAnimeLover89
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Trunks! *snicker* Don\'t u just hate those situations when u don\'t know what the hell is goin on but everyone else around u does?! UPDATE SOON!!!
person bob
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! it\'s update, i luved chapter 27 but that cliffhanger was the meanest thing!! what\'s gonna happen??? i wanna know but anyway i luuuved chapter 27 because it had funny moments and they found trunks but that cliffhanger was just pure evil!!!

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