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for Come Together

by chayron

person Webtester01
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!

I hope Norayan gets defeated.
person Kugatsu
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blinks*



and now for my impression of Keanu Reeeves...


Whoa...
person bob
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely luv this story, i luv goku when he\'s all possessive its funny. that lemon in chapter 24 was awesome......and yea i can\'t wait 4 the next chapter so yea....update i can\'t wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person BballAnimeLover89
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAH!! They finally know where Trunks is! UPDATE SOON!!!
person Webtester01
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They get closer and closer. :D

I look forward to Noryan\'s demise.
person achillona 77
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. BUT I still SAY that there is a special connection between Ahrae and Vegeta. HMM? Momma\'s baby, Poppa\'s maybe!!!

Keep up the good work!!!


~~~A~~~
person Kugatsu
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ach haben lieber Honig, ich nur um ein Jahr eine eine Hälfte von Deutsch an Hochschule studiert! ^W^ ich hoffe, dass ich Ihnen den falschen Eindruck nicht gegeben habe!

Ich schreibe es und lese es besser als ich kann es sprechen, aber ich schreibe es sehr gut nicht. Ich habe dieses wie drei Stunden nach Ihrer Erwiderung zu meiner Bemerkung geschrieben. Es ist der Sommer, damit ich eine harte Zeit habe, erinnernd sich an mein Deutsch!

and the story is very good! teehee pregnant Vegeta. I never did answer your question huh...I\'m American sorry. T_T...i also hope my german isn\'t all messed up....
person BballAnimeLover89
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHERE THE HELL IS TRUNKS AT!!??
person Kugatsu
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Deutsch, Ja wohl!

^w^

Loved this too. Poor vegeta sama...
person Webtester01
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looks like it\'s going to be a bumpy ride all the way to Norayan\'s abode.

At least they found a clean place to stay this time.

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