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i loved the chapter now vegeta and goku have to be more alert especially since vegeta is going into heat.

damn you and your cliffhangers..........

ah! I must have more! that was sweet!

loved the fight for who will be dominant in the relationship. the sex after it was hot to.

Yay! The was an exciting couple of chapters.

I look forward to more.

great chapter i hope everything will be all right with goku and vegeta.

Oooh. More chalenges to overcome.

great chapter i can\'t wait for the next one.

Heh. Ragas got what he deserved.

Keep up the writing.

I sat here and read all of your chapters and I must say you have an interesting story going here. I like the way you make Goku and Vegeta interact with each other. They have a sweet, romantic, loving relationship. You are doing well with it. I have to admit I did hate Ahrae (sp) at first, she was and kind of still is a Mary Sue. She seems to be all powerful and invincible and that can get annoying. But as the story developed she has seemed to become a more tame and likeable character. I kind of
enjoy that we see all perspectives of people and pasts. Kind of like everyone is woven together. The fact that Vegeta has killed many people is widely known, but how often do we get to see him walking, fighting, and struggling to get a long with a person from the very race in which he has killed someone. I love that! I do have one question though, Vegeta had panic attacks at the begining of this fic, will he continue to have those? Or have they subsided?
Your plot seems to be well thought out and it is a very likeable and intriguing story. I can barely wait until the next update. I keep hoping Trunks is alive.