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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think i see competition coming in the form of this ragas guy.
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looks like they are on their way, and a stanger has joined them in their journey.
I look forward to the next chapter.
There are some spelling and grammar errors that made it past your betas.
I look forward to the next chapter.
There are some spelling and grammar errors that made it past your betas.
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOw.I love this and it took me two days to finished all 13 chapters.I would love it if you continued since this is a wonderfull and great story.This is so adorable the way i think about Goku being like a woman when he said continue in chapter 13.Squeeeee,I can\'t contain my excitment^o^;
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter.
I hope they can get out of the pickle they are in.
I hope they can get out of the pickle they are in.
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter wow what vegeta gave out was alot of infomation.
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that is quite the action scene!
You descriptions of the events in your stories are very colorful and fun to read.
Keep it up.
You descriptions of the events in your stories are very colorful and fun to read.
Keep it up.
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOUR STORY IS..........ABSOLUTELLY, POSITIVELLY, wonderful! I read the entire thing in one sitting and just couldn\'t get enough, i think you\'ve captured everyone perfectly, in their thoughts, some reactions, I just love it, although i am very saddened by this last chapter, poor \'Geta, i hope he gets bettah!
~Spig~
~Spig~
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter and i hope vegeta will be o.k.
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I just read both To Hell Together and what is posted of Come Together all in one sitting. I enjoy both stories, there is something about them both that is quite intriguing. I like the characterzations of Goku and Vegeta, Vegeta in particular. You did a great job of showing how his pride would be the cause of many problems. I love how Goku is still quite innocent and clueless, but he isn\'t a complete idiot; You\'ve managed to keep a good balance. I also enjoy the extra characters you\'ve added in the sequal, and they add to the story rather than take from it. I keep going back and forth between respecting/liking Ahrae and hating her/wishing she would die already. I can\'t wait for the next chapter! If you\'re having trouble getting ahold of your beta, I\'d be happy to fill in when they can\'t. Send me an email anytime. ^_^
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story! It has some awesome humour in it, I have a bit of a obsession for yaoi... xD