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for Come Together

by chayron

person Webtester01
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9

They are alive. *Sighs in relief*
I hope they can begin their quest again soon.
person Webtester01
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I kew it was a trap!

I wonder how they will get out of this pickle.

Great story!!

I look forward to the next chapter.
person War-chan
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH, HELL NO!!!!! YOU GET YOUR ASS RIGHT BACK TO TYPING LITTLE MISSY!!!!!!!!!!!! Ahem...sorry pent up anger does that to a person. Well as my anger clearly says.....I\'ll just spell it out for you, UPDATE DAMNIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORYS TOO MUCH FOR YOU NOT TO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ja ne
GodsYouBetterHurryAndUPDATE!!!
Miss War-chan ^_^ (anger now gone....)
person Webtester01
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6

That was great! I hope they find Trunks.
person The Chichi Slaughter House
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Nice update! I would be reviewing on ff.net, but accounts been deleted and you aren\'t on my author alert anymore. peice o shit. Anyway, loved this chap so far. Write more soon!
person Silver Tear
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
owww...dum...dumm...dummmm.... suspensful...


anyways yet another fantastic chappy... ST love your ficcy... i know the review function is supposed to be for constructive critisium... but i cant be bothtered and i think your fics perfect so there...bluh!

to sum uo... your fic me love...

so i\'d better go... there are some teletubbies after me... something to do with filling their house with tubby custard.... which they cant prove i done!

luv

st

^_^
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is very enjoyable. It is obvious to a blind man that Ahrae is Vegeta\'s daughter. Same attitude. The question is how did they get his DNA and who is her mother? Is cloning involved? Can\'t wait to read subsequent chapters. This is very good...very ... intriguing. Keep up the good work. Anxiously awaiting more chapters. (I read all of the chapters and the prequel and have no complaint. Excellent storytelling!)
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!!!
Please don\'t take too long to update.
person anubiset
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading this one and the first one. I loved them both and hope that you finish this one soon. The story is very intriguing and I coudn`t stop reading it, even though I`m unbearably tired.
person Silver Tear
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was well worth the wait! OMG OMG OMG! i really hope it doesn\'t take that lo0ng to update again... but if it does... i\'ll wait! lol yea i\'m still alive... bit stiff from all the waiting! lol. *still in shock over events in last 2 chappies!*

WOW

Keep typing hun
Luv
ST
^_^

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