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November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GOD DAMN!!!! THAT WAS GOOOOOD!!!!! i feel a tingling in my bajingling. i will review a hundred more times if thats what it takes to get you to finish that chapter. and then ill review a thousand more times to finish that story. rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr damn that is one hell of a hot fanfiction. and you could make that one goood too. a damn good one. hell it already is.
anyway happy writing
ravi
anyway happy writing
ravi
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November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really, really want you to continue this........I didn't particaullarly (sp?) care for the use of the word "Fuck" and "Gay" (as in homosexual) in this Renny fair type setting. But I love how you used Lady Une, Treize and Relena as the evil family and Dorothy Catalonia as the Inquisition. I would if I were you use more old English terms....you know like Chaucer Catibury (sp?) Tales type of shit....
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this so far!!! Please update really soon!!!!!!!
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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cool story i really liked the book dragon bait i 've read it like 8 times update soon.
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September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the book Dragon Bait. I also like the way you are changing some bits of it to fit the characters. Please write some more soon or just e-mail me the next chapter. I am at chapter 4.
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August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AH! This is so cool. Heero is quite coy, and a dragon *smiles* If he wasn't senougnough aly, ty, then that certainly completes the package. Keep going! I'm so interested.
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August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cute story. try not to shy away from the intensity that you could create.
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very different take on 2 x 1...i like it..hope u finish soon
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow that is all i can say i love it keep going keep going
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August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so far so good. do plan to let duo get his revenge on those stupid vilager? and will the rest of the g-boys be making an apearance?