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May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! That was sooo hot! I loved your descriptions, and you portrayed their personalities perfectly! Vegeta must have been ecstatic at the prospect of having Kakarott on his knees...
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this one it i very awesome and cool..Keep up the great work make another chapetr
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very well-written! Not many errors, it flowed, it was enticing, so drool-worthy! ^_^ And Vegeta is seme!! I\'m so happy! :D
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An interesting story so far, I enjoy the way you captured the primal ‘lust’ of the Saiyajins. You have made Chichi seem like a terrible over bearing bitch, but in a believable fashion. I hope you will be continuing this plot.
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November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well-written songfic. I have a voice in my head like Goku\'s too. Anyway, keep up the great work. ^_^