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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ehh I'm a friend of the author. I'll be honest. The fic needs work. Sorry luv no disrespect ok?
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story was good and interesting, but it would make it easier to read for me if the grammar/punctuation was fixed in some places.
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story was good and interesting, but it would make it easier to read for me if the grammar/punctuation was fixed in some places.
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August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is actually pretty good :)
Hurry with the next chapter!!!!
Hurry with the next chapter!!!!