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Dude...you just...and then...but he...YOU EVIL LITTLE WENCH! That was really, really in true Dragon-chan form, all angst heaped angst with a dark and twisted ending that makes me want to offer you a painful and gory death. But...oh, so so good. You have this tremendous knack for making us unsuspecting readers believe that we\'re headed in one direction, then flip us on our asses \'kung-foo\' style. As always, your style is immaculate, and descriptions so vivid, I can literally see the scenes in my mind\'s eye. It is also very evident that you did a lot of research, and I like that you were subtle about it, making us pay attention to the little minx\'s actions instead of outright telling us what was going on with him. Smashing job, doll! My only complaint is that you need to add the rest of the ficcie to this sight for the poor readers who haven\'t seen you at The Vault. *glompage*

Wow...that was great. What a twisted ending. You have a great writing style! I REALLY enjoyed this fic, and my jaw is still hanging open.

Wow that was written very well. I am impressed by your writing skills. I absoulutly loved Duo in this^^ Didn't Wufei find it suspicious that he didn't tell Duo his name. I didn't expect it to end the way it did. Very good story, very original! Loved it. ^_^

*blinks* WHOA. This has to be one of the saddest, yet shibbiest 2x5 fics I've read in a long time!! Props to you Jade, props to you. You posess a great sense of descriptionary tactics in your writing, whether used in the background or in relation to your characters. I really admired your sex scene. It reminded me of a PWP, but with an actual plot (if that makes ANY sense....-_-;) In short, lots of hot yaoi goodness, but with an engaging and slightly angsty storyline to go with it (Go romantic angst!! WOOT!) My only bit of advice: WRITE MORE!! The fanfic community can always use more 2x5 lemons!! Keep up the good work!!

Pax Amour Et Lepos In Iocando

--- Anulia Kaleel